Reviews for Naruto and the Deathly Hallows
Elizabeth loines chapter 10 . 7/14
Please continue
WatermelonSuiKa chapter 10 . 6/7
I love this story so much. Like it's been awhile since i started reading it. I am still waiting for the update and i'm not going to abandon this story. It's one of my most favorite ever. I love the way Gaara is so in character and as well as the other characters. Well, i just hope you will update soon.
Guest chapter 10 . 5/6
It's fine! The story was good until now and i believe that it'll continue to be. This story is really nice and it take me, e enjoy to continue reading this and I can wait you. I think that no one have to feel obligate to do something, write in this case, so if you want to continue, excellent! If you not, don't mind, I'm not going to criticize you or what, just think on my own what you coukd rhinking for an ending, but i'm not a writer, just a person who like imagine. So finally I decide to stop writing and I wish you have a good work!
lara5170 chapter 10 . 1/14
This is interesting and I'm looking forward to reading more
watermelon chapter 10 . 12/20/2019
uwaaaah! update please. I really love this series. From the previous one to this. wiieeh! and im actually sooo happy you pursue the GaaLuna couple. I mean, i can already sense their chemistry from that ball. Owemji. A big thumbs up for ya. *
ZF chapter 10 . 12/12/2019
Hello, loved Naruto and the Goblet of Fire and really enjoy this one too. I was wondering, since Voldemort cannot summon enemy ninja against Naruto, what will he use to counter a kyuubi cloak? Seeing how powerful a 2 tailed Naruto was it would likely need far more than a few Petrificus Totalus and Stupefy to stop him, should he be provoked. I was thinking about the dark-creatures Voldemort employed, while Werewolves are an interesting start, the Inferi and Giants are too. The latter are big enough to be a threat to any (not to mention their resistance to magic) and the former are undead and while vulnerable to fire would be immune to any kunai and shuriken and easily shake off a base rasengan, making them a problem for Naruto.
Zoommerfish chapter 4 . 12/7/2019
Will Naruto use his wand? He did spend a ear learning after all and I'm interested in seeing a combination jutsu-spell, like using a fire spell like incendio with the rasenshuriken or something.

I'm also interested if you'll do a Ginny-Naruto pairing or something, Goblet of Fire's Yule Dance and kiss certainly piqued my interests. Regardless, great chapter as usual, looking forward to updates
nctdream chapter 10 . 9/2/2019
I've been reading this verse for 8 years or more, I practically grew up with you omg.
ms.meow1968 chapter 10 . 8/18/2019
Your doing well and am enjoying this beautiful story immensely. Good character development.
queenfirst chapter 10 . 8/13/2019
hey! glad to see you're back!
Coup Droit chapter 10 . 8/8/2019
Hey man keep up the good work. Try not to fall too far off the wagon. I'm not usually one to read fics with short chapters but I went back and read NGOF and now I'm all updated on this too. Keep it rolling.
TrenchcoatMan chapter 10 . 8/5/2019
Just finished both the original and this one. It's been an interesting read so far.
You can really see the evolution of your story, from back when you were writing it mid-manga to now where the manga is long over.

I think you definitely missed out on some opportunities in writing this verse, but overall it's been pretty enjoyable so far. I do wonder if your gonna be able to finish it. I know how life can really make it impossible to write. The same is true for me. Im like 3 to 4 chapters away from finishing my first real fic and they just won't get themselves written, plus work leaves me with no real time to think about how to get them done. It can be a real hassle, but I definitely want to see it happen.

Im definitely enjoying Gaara x Luna. I haven't really seen any other unique pairings that im all too interested in yet, but we'll see. Personally, I could have seen Kakashi and Sirius hooking up, but that was one of those possibilities not taken. I'd thought, if he went back to Konoha with them, he could have survived.

Gotta really feel bad for poor Draco. In Canon we never really see how bad it was for him, but I can see it being just this bad. I wander if Snape is going to work with Gaara from the get go or if he's going to be problematic. I'll hold out hope for him though.

OOO, bringing in a random nazi-scientist... wizard. I like this new possibility. I know you said no additional Naruto characters, but it feels like Voldemort somehow got his hands on one and has had him for some time. Im sure its more along the lines of making a wizarding Jinchuuriki though. Either option is pretty horrifying

I've gotta say, you've taken Naruto to a pretty Dark place outta nowhere. Not that it's a bad direction for him. It is a war and he understands it better than anyone, but it did really catch me off guard.

I will say, my only real complaint through both fics is how underpowered the Shinobi feel.
Wizarding magic does have it's strengths, no doubt, but really just about all spells can be dodged and most of the Shinobi you're writing with are well known for being evasive or having nifty sand to block with. You did a good job in the first fic, drugging Kakashi, cause honestly without it he would have wrecked Riddle and crew, but in this most previous encounter I feel like he really shouldn't have lost. He had both prior experience with wizards and he wasn't drugged. Even with new spells, you know, he's like one of most powerful shinobi from Naruto.

Anyway, thats my only rant. Imma go pass out now
Hope to see more soon

-TCM
Mystic 777 chapter 10 . 8/4/2019
I totally understand. Real life comes first, anyone who doesn't understand that is either a child or has the mentality of one. Thank you for the update!
Iziel chapter 10 . 8/3/2019
I'm so happy that you start updating this again.. I never doubt that you will abandoned this wonderful fanfic...
Lightningscar chapter 10 . 8/2/2019
*blinks owlishly* Okay, this is kinda scary... just 3 or 4 days ago I was looking at this story and searching for the other place you posted, thinking maybe you had just given up on this site and posted it there... but no. I was considering writing you, but then I imagined that you had given up and/or were busy with real life issues and would appreciate some random dude who read your stories years bother you with questions about the story... especially if had you retired from the site entirely.

So imagine my surprise when I got the notification in my inbox... for some reason, I couldn't get myself to take it off my alert list.

Good chappie :) Quality over quantity :)

Love the idea that they have taken to shinobi-training again... not just as a means to stay sane while coped up, but also as a good distraction from the worries of the war and to prepare themselves for fight.
Chuckled at the idea of them using prints of persons they don't like... such a hearty juvenile thing to do... remember the time when one had pictures of people you didn't like and then would throw darts or whatever after them

Interesting meeting in between the Death Eaters... that doctor Shryke sounds like a very unpleasant person... and he works with/ experiments on Greyback? Nasty and nasty teamup.
Only thing I think you need to take a little look at, unless it was deliberate, was the notification that he and Albus tossed around ideas in their quest for power... to my knowledge, Voldemort and Albus never did any of that... though, Grindelwald and Dumbledore did... not sure if I read that part correctly.
At any rate, now that Voldemort knows that at least Gaara is back, things are about to heat up... though, now I just have the image of Kakashi suddenly dropping by Voldemort and with his usual eye-crinkle, saluting him with "Yo. Remember me?" XD

If you ever need to vent over nasty reviews, my inbox is open... had a few share of those myself. Same with life struggles. So if you ever need an outlet, just say the word.

Hoping to see more :)

Yours sincerely,

Lightningscar
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