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A heartwarming story...

very sweet

How sweet...I love young Estel fics!

Excelent descriptions! What a wonderful story. It is a good lesson to any writer and a good tale to any reader and LotR lovers.

Thanks for sharing it.

Sadie

SO SWEET! I can totally picture Elrond doing that! XD

Luv, Luv, Luv,

Artemis Sherwood

Awww... how sweet. It might have been done a millions times, but I really like this one. Great job.

A great story. Very well written.

This was a well written story, with plenty of description. On the whole, the dialogue was very good. However...

Do NOT use the word 'ok'. EVER. That is very much a modern term, it did not exist when Tolkien wrote the books and none of his characters used it. And coming from Elrond, it sounded especially odd. Elrond is old, very old, and very wise. His speech has a very graceful and curteous vocabulary. 'Ok' would certainly never fall from his lips.

Aside from that, good work. You have the potential to write very well, but you must first master the small things in order to produce something big.

Yours faithfully,

HP

Very sweet images...nice little story-let.

A million times indeed... more like a JILLION.

But that's ok. : )

Good story, I liked it. Just the kind of thing that would really happen, poor Estel.

This is such a cute and heartwarming story!