I read My Drunken Valentine! It's taped on my school folder!

very funny i liked it. last few lines were very good.

Ahah, that comic from BlackLillian always makes me smile x)

This fic really seemed to capture Yuffie & the lovely sexual tension between her and the, what, man who's at least 534 years old? Haha.

I definitely smiled! :) The ending was quite funny, and it just seemed to be Yuffie somehow!

ANYWAYS, great fic again! KEEP WRITING!

This was supposed to feel slow, I think, but I also think you over-did it. I didn't get the sense of the mounting tension exactly, sexual or otherwise.

I did, however, like the idea and the concept. And how the boom-booms are like heartbeats and also gun shots (especially with the stop there). Also, so many of the lines are laced with sexual innuendo.

Also, the verbal lines are very Yuffie. So this even throws me with the slowness more.

'Twas fine, but pacing choppy-like.

I love that comic! And this story!

Smexy. Yum. you are fabulous at making an impression, so keep this up, and you're definitely gonna get somewhere.

Peace love Yuffentine!

Lol, the last two lines were hillarious. You were true to the characters so don't you worry, though I do haveto wonder what Yuffie did to drive Vince to that point. I loved it, but at this point you don't even have to ask because I love everything you've been writing. Hopefully this isn't the end of your VinceYuffie writing? I'll come back and poke you with a stick for more! Lovely story and I can't wait to see anything else you may bring out. :)

Joey

Whoo, I could feel the sexual tension in this! This was a great read, for some reason, the thought of Yuffie taunting Vincent like that really appeals to me. :)

O.o I think I'll check that comic out.

This was great! I've never really liked Yuffie and Vincent, though I guess I've never really read them or anything...This kinda persuaded me a little. I mean, they don't really go well with anyone else, do they? O.o

Loved it, as I always do The ending was cute xD