Ohh this seem good

good

Ah, well this will be interesting. Nicely done!

Ah, that's sad that you and Kallou had a 'major falling-out', but the chapter was very good. Nicely done!

*This is just for chapter 17*
~Z snap~ YOU GO GIRL. As I was reading the comment about the whole 'the abused wouldn't abuse', I started laughing. :/ It's actually a fact that most serial killers and psychopaths have been traumatized, and instead of the larger percentage of people who would try to avoid any unnecessary turns back to the memory, psychopaths enjoy the memory; however they twist it to where they are the ones causing the harm.
Love your story, btw. (Don't care if you probably won't see this since it was a few years ago, but whatever. x3)

The chapters you've redone are great! Nicely done.

That. Was. Amazing! I can't wait to keep reading and I hope that Gaara and Sasori become a terrifying duo. That would be awesome! Kai and Sasori, interesting. Not sure if I'll love it but I will read on to find out. Nicely done with the chapter and there was one error, but I can't seem to remember exactly what it was... Oh well.

I am surprised at their reactions to Kankuro and Sakura, getting it on, mostly Kai's though. I am thinking that Shikamaru is dead, that's why the teachers didn't see him, and only his wing mate's see his ghost because they were close to him. And with that last scene with Gaara talking to him then him suddenly being gone, seems like a ghost to me. Anyway, nicely done!

That was interesting. Nicely done.

Wow, you sure seem to like killing people off, but it's entertaining to say the least. Nicely done with the chapter and keep up the good work. I have to agree though that that was a pretty great cock block... :)

Seriously?! Those reviews, oh my fucking god. That's some messed up (excuse my language) shit. You can't go around giving out reviews like that, no matter who you are. And calling someone's OC a little troll whatever, that's totally uncalled for and immensely rude and mean. Gosh I HATE people who review like that, and I'm so terribly sorry that you got reviews like that. Don't pay them any heed because this story if fucking amazing, (again sorry about language) you honestly don't deserve to get reviews like that. I'm glad that you responded like that, the person deserved what you dished out. Shame on her.
Also, I really like option A- 'Create an OC for this idiot and murder her off.' sounds pretty amazing because she seriously... no never mind. I can't review like that... ANYWAY! I am pleased that you responded the way you did, the only thing I find... um... can't find the correct wording for it, is for the title of the chapter, you should have added 'Author's Note' or something so people know and aren't too surprised or pissed that it's not a chapter. But I'm glad, again I need to find different synonyms for it, that you took the negative from it and turned it into something, less bad. You got more material for your story and that's something I admire in your work.

That was rather peculiar, I didn't think one could learn to control flashbacks, that's cool. Nicely done!

That was some great gore scenes, amazing! I loved it and can't wait to read the next chapter. Also, I find it 'cute' that Gaara and Sakura are becoming more comfortable with each other. It's very interesting and peculiar to read though rather entertaining at the same time. Nicely done!

The ending was interesting, Gaara and Sakura are getting... closer in their... relationship. The chapter was really good, well done.

That was great! I like that's it's starting to 'heat up' between some couples, very interesting. Fantastic work!