Reviews for Pet Shop Allure: Desire
emowoods205 chapter 1 . 11/27/2017
(Crap I ship Dyme and Itachi hard...) It's so lovely how Sasuke fell in love with Naruto the moment he met him..Also Naruto is so cute and adorable ugh I just want to cuddlefuck the crap out of him! Sasuke was such a pervert wanting to rape the shit out of Naruto all the time XD I really loved the sex scene (Lovemaking/Mating) it was so erotic...and fucking sexy as hell the feral lust and the desparate need was splendid... (XD Naruto wasn't so innocent all along he took a nip of Sasukes blood..then waiting for his heat (Ughh you should have added self lubrication) and got Sasuke to mate him...that little minx...) I'm kinda hoping for a SasuNaru Mpreg sequel it would be so perfect they could have a little boy and maybe Naru could lactate and everything!
riddikulusxx chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
that was... *wipes away blood*... just.. wonderful! I've been looking for a story like this :D thank you so much for doing this I hope u write a sequel or something ;)

*runs away and prepares for another nosebleed..?*
emokitty4242564666 chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
I say its was amazing im trying to post a story or at least part of one but im such a newb i dont know how DX
Moonpuzzle chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Hot Damn *blush*

Very Hot

THANKS! XD
YinKeket chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
really girls camping on the front lawn to give Sasuke his gift is crazy. poor Sasuke and Itachi. poor Naruto is last of his kind. awesome how Sasuke is taken with him. way to go Itachi to find this gift. uh on the rules and really on the last one. i wonder. yay on them mating. i hope there will be a squeal to this.
Adjii H chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Love how you describe what they look. Cute Naru!
XxCharlottexX1 chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I like it! I made the conections between the blood and stuff (Ironically, I made them as soon as Dyme mentioned them, and not when Naruto explained it xD)

Clever plot line! Very good for a slightly-short PWP. Though it's not really a PWP because it tells a story...though it is a one-shot. Yeah.

And this is SO not crappy! I love this! The writing may not be ASTONISHING, but it is still VERY enjoyable to read and think about. :)
DEMONIC BLACKMAGIC chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
HEEHEE GREAT I LOVED IT!
MistressOfRobins chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Uuuuh! I enjoyed this one very much :3 great job!
Theasus chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
uhm...it's crappy?...i dunno how crappy do you wannt me to tell you it is O_?
666snoopy chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Naruto makes the best pet. That was great!
sher162252 chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
This one shot was Awesome.. Thank you so much for writing it :D :D :D
scarletraika chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Aw― so cute.

I love it.
lovely.vampire101 chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Oh my gawd...that was FLIPPIN HAWT AT HELL! I beg you, please write a sequal! Please! *gets on knees* Please! This story is to cute and sexy to be left alone! please!
Reeve's-Revenge chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
I love you. Not seriously but I love this story!
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