Sam be useless

Just great!

The pacing on this was perfect. You really captured the panic they were all feeling. And I love Good Guy John. You're so good as writing him as imperfect but trying. Love it!

geez dean, that's not pretty.. good story

This story has great pacing..had me jumping quickly for sentence to sentence..nervous about what was coming next.
Great work!

Poor Sammy & Dean D: That would be such a horrible situation, thank goodness John showed up in time to save the day. This kept me interested the whole way through, nice story Princess.
PS- That would so be Dean as a teen, trying to gross out little Sammy with every chance he got ;)

The read was enjoyable, the suspense level just right.

Oh man, that's crazy o_O great story.

So the joke is on Dean. That will teach him to play a prank on Sammy. NOT! lol.

Glad John got there in time and played good father. Now training sessions are going to be a bi*ch aren't they. :)

Great story!

Wow. I can't beleive that Dean manged to choke by doing something compleatly stupid. Well... it is something Dean would do...

Dawww! John showed up to save the day! Love seeing him be all loving and protective. Great little story. )

Oh gosh! Veryyyyy well written! My heart is beating a little faster than normal at the thought of Dean dying.

Good job, and keep writing!

Good story!

I loved this story. Thank God that John got there when he did, though it would have been ironic if Dean actually choked to death, considering his favourite thing to do is eat.

Well done!