I haven't really been leaving comments, but I do like what you're doing with Eriol. Dark, ambitious, complex. A touch bitter. I always like my Hiiragizawa resentful. Who wouldn't be? Heritage and history are a burden no one should have to bear.

A powerful piece. A haunting, poignant, and profound exploration of Eriol, his birth, and his destiny. You write with such elegance and maturity.

This is so interesting! I can't wait for the next chapter. This place needs more Eriolfics that arent E&T releated. Please continue!

Yes! Make it an epic fic! I'm liking this, and your word choice is fabulous. Keep up the good work!