| Reviews for Ricochet |
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DEG chapter 2 . 7/1/2014 Are you kidding me. Not only is this a huge cliffhanger, you haven't updated in 5 years. |
ShikaTachidoriKitsuneHebiTaka chapter 2 . 9/1/2012 oh dear... |
Alia Sukai chapter 2 . 1/21/2011 MUST update! Love this story! |
Homestarluver201 chapter 2 . 8/25/2010 Oh noe! Marth, please be okay! I really hope Ike finds him. I like yaoi fanfics...:3 Continue it ASAP! :D This is really good! I enjoy the really descriptive words you used in the first chap. to describe Marth's feelings...:D |
MaxiBoi2015 chapter 2 . 8/31/2009 C'mon Ike! Help the boy! Geez Marth for heaven's sake open your feelings up to someone else! Someone else can accepted them sheesh! Anyway can't wait for the Zellink 8D. I'm more keen on that then IkeMarth. But this story is real good and I wouldn't be reading a YAOI if it wasn't too good at all. Surprisingly, YAOI stories seem to be extremely well detailed and written well. Good job with not dragging it too much. From Yours Truly, TBJ Twilight BlayderJulz |
El Nino1 chapter 2 . 8/31/2009 "Did he just sniff Marth's underwear?" I think it's official. Ike's a perv. |
Fhal chapter 1 . 8/24/2009 AH Shame on me for the late review. And also, I DON'T DESERVE YOU PRAISE, DEAR! Your creativity writes this fic v The 'drinking party' preceding Ike's main entrance really reminds me of a friend of mine; the typical college/post-secondary school guy. You nailed it pretty nicely and score points for some reality~! : ) (Something to look forward to in later years, I guess?) The photos' descriptions are so cute, especially the one of Link & Toon Link~ I know that next chapter is coming, but I'm just here to give an extra push ;D |
ShadSam chapter 1 . 8/2/2009 All I can say; this story is wonderful. I'm in love with the way you write, and how you make the character's personalities. I can picture them so well acting that way! Please, keep this going, because it's simply amazing! I can't wait to see what happens! |
Lack of a Name chapter 1 . 7/31/2009 Oh, wow. I dislike Roy/Marth particularly for these reasons. It's just painful. I'm not sure why, but it's just painful for me. And what a jerk! The way Roy put his reasoning was just...I don't know...it was like a slap in the face. At least he didn't get upset at Marth. I guess what I feel was that his and Marth's relationship was a fling, nothing serious, and he wanted to be serious then. Ugh. I hate thinking about it. Sorry! But I love Ike's personality so far. Cute. Can't wait to read more. It was a long read, not particularly long, but it was a good lengthy read. Please write more. |
Hearii chapter 1 . 7/30/2009 I really don't see why you thought this was so terrible XD It didn't come out that way at all, so calm down and take a breather (...and write the next chapter?) before you whine. Kidding, kidding. But seriously. Although a few parts seemed a bit bumpy with unnecessary detail, though I loved the detail on Marth's emotions. And Ike's food hunt was pretty damn amusing. Regardless, I support the continuation of this! |
anyone chapter 1 . 7/30/2009 This story is written with so much emotion, I really love the way you're writing this piece! Keep it going and update soon! |
ShabalbaIggy chapter 1 . 7/30/2009 Even thought I like Ike/Marth, reading his breakup with Roy made mee so sad. It's detailed and I can tell it will be fun to read once you update. |
MaxiBoi2015 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009 I'm impressed with the detail that you have given in this story. There's a lot of very descriptive words to capture the emotions. Just be careful not to drag it along too much - that will make it less appealing. A lot of readers don't like things to drag too much, however it's good that you're focusing on the emotion. I'm overall impressed with the beginning chapter. Update soon. From Yours Truly, TBJ |