Loved it! Fantastic.

Wow, that was very emotionally intense.

That was so beautiful, almost brought me to tears. Thank-you :)

That was beautiful.

So beautiful and poetic!

that was... absolutely brilliant! One of the best, well written, most beautiful fanfiction I've ever read! And you did it without words! Beautiful!

This was beautifully written, well done. :-)

I've reread this story so many times. This perfection. My favorite "first time" story ever. You write so beautifully that it literally makes my heart ache. Thanks again.

I loved this! What an amazing job! And its more then just the physical side you touched, its also just..how important each other is to the other. BEautiful

This is so good. Very deep, and I love the not quite reality of the whole thing. Very good prose as well. The English major approves.

This is artwork. You created such a tremendous atmosphere and its hard to believe you did it with mere words. Well done.

VERY nice!

bravo. rose ten smut is hard to find. and this was flawless.

That was... beautiful. And utterly fantastic.

This was excellent. I really loved it and this is honestly how I had hoped The Satan Pit would end...Well, I didn't expect it to end quite like this. Doctor Who is a family show ha ha. But I had at least hoped for a kiss.