Hello. I was wondering if you were ever going to finish this story? If not, can you at least tell me how it would have ended?

Hi i hope you will be finishing this story it's fantastic. Please finish it or else it will be a great waste of your tallent.

This is *wonderful*... neat to read! Thanks for writing!

Fascinating! This was great to see from Carlisle's point of view... and your take on Alice's style of thinking with her gift is really neat and very apt! This is great! Thanks for writing!

Fascinating! It's fun to hear the train of Bella's thoughts, and the very odd, matter-of-fact, but very refreshing way she occasionally comments on things. Fun! :)

I really like how much you evidently care about the characters you're writing about, specifically in the case of the Cullens. As a FFn author myself, I have felt the same about my presentations of them... I try my very *best* to keep them as true as possible to the canon I love, and yet I am constantly worrying that it didn't come out right. :) It's part and parcel of not being the character's original author. And, we are always our own worst critics.

Still, I really like how much the care you put into doing it right shows through. *Thank you very much for that!* Good canon-character fics are getting hard to come by. I'd recommend mine for you to read, but I don't know if you'd like Harry Potter crossovers. In any case, Thank you again for writing!

Very interesting! I like the subtle yet significant changes you've made, and the clear sense of the intensity of Edward's feelings. Very nicely done! Thanks for writing!

This is fascinating! An alternative but intriguing approach to their meeting of Twilight. Neat! Thanks for writing!

And I like how much she noticed the pain in his eyes (last chapter). A touching perspective. :)

Interesting!

please can u update this story as i am still waiting to find out what happens and how it ends please

I absolutely love it! Please, please, please continue!

Ah, so sad this is the last of this. It would have been good, I'm sure. :-)

This is a cute little story so far. I'm not sure I understand what your authors note a few chaps back was about, but I'm glad you cont'd working on this. I've recently sworn off WIPs but I couldn't resist. Are you still active? Do you plan on finishing? Will have to check your profile and review more when I get home. Hard to type on the phone. ;-)

Ginnie

PLEASE tell me you are going to add more chapters! I absolutely love this book normally, don't read straight through BUT I couldnt stop reading!

Edward has a long way to go.

Loved it.

Keep writing,

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