I dont like other peoples smell on u. lmao that's was great!

Love it. Shame it was dropped.

I love this story. So freaking good. I know 8 years is a long time but maybe you could think of coming back to update it?

Hoping that you come back to finish this, I'm liking the story so far and would love to see more.

Update please

Wow, what's Uley whining about now?

"So, unless you want to be forced into being mated to a wolf" so the wolves would have raped her if she wasn't first marked by a vampire? And as it stands one broke into her home while she appeared to be mid-coitus? Hmm, Bella looks cold. Maybe she could us a nice fur coat? Or blanket?

Bella really is remarkably cool about this though I suppose that could just be the fact that an incredibly attractive vampire is lying on top of her and making it difficult to think. Have to wonder what the wolves think they can do, throwing their weight around like that

I liked this, a wolf fucked up but they weren't all painted as demonic hellspawn. Still wish he'd have crossed the treaty line so Alice coulda kicked him back over
Has Alice just decided to no longer hide what she is because if not I wonder how she plans to explain that last scene

Huh, I always thought home economics was just cooking, do they actually do stuff like this? I loved it either way though

Guess everyone knows that Alice is a creepy stalker person, good thing she's far too loveable to not forgive. Jake on the otherhand, not cute at all

Her attempt is more excusable than Edward's but she loses in execution. Not sure whether or not it'd be good to be a less talented creeper than Edward
Hahaha, my god. She's won the most creepy scene competition though. Finds her bleeding in the middle of nowhere and presses against her body and whispers her name in her ear. Not judging, but wow xD

My mind kinda just went to a dark place but if Jasper and Alice's romance followed canon plot then it's pretty similar to how she feels about Bella right now. What if this is just going to be a cycle till she has these self-fulfilling prophecies about the people she's "destined" to be with, leaving one after the other just as she's about to meet the next. Each and every one a possible mate but in chasing each possibility she'll never have her forever...

Read this a few times now, always enjoyed it while it lasts. Sad its abandoned.

You were talking about not abandoning the story just 2 chapters ago and now look at it...

Anyway, this is a pretty solid story and I enjoyed most of it except for chapters 7 and 8. Those were crap. I hope by some one in a million chance you do return, you continue this.