WOW, This was a great read! I was expecting it to be longer and am kinda disappointed it's over. But I thoroughly enjoyed it. AWESOME WORK, AUTHOR!

The story is fine but your grammar needs work. For example, you can "relish" or you can "revel in" but you cannot "relish in."

cola bottle bases (,)(no 'and')

"on (no 'a') bar"

Your sentence order makes things unclear.

Ex. his client (killing the victim) at ... would be clearer since it is what is being viewed.

In the next sentence, the reader has to interpret for whom it would be better. Phoenix's name needs to be earlier in the sentence. You can use pronouns latter. Came...'c' needs to be lower case. Problems like this exist throughout the story. It needed another draft.

Cute and silly 3

Hey, this one is much less angsty than the other ones but it’s a real pleasure to find many characters from the Phoenix Wright games ; I particularly like the Judge. And I certainly didn’t expect Hotti would be there, looking for Franziska.

Well, as usual, a woman felt for Miles but poisoning him was maybe a bit too far. Fortunately for her, Wendy Oldbag wasn’t here! Despite being a near-murder case, this story is full of humor and very nicely written. Good work!