The children's name is English or Hebrew, of modern time. It does not make any sense to an Ancient Egyptian or even current Egypt setting. And the name does not fit into the Egyptian royal family where tradition to have names representing the gods they serve or worship. The name of the children's at cp. 19 made me confuse on if the characters in this story are American or European not Egyptian at all.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Hi there i was just wondering if you are doing more other storys or new ones . Because i think you are a really good writer .

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I've read this before but with a different username (Zena McClain) but I forget the password so I had to get a new Gmail so now my username is (Zara) and my new Gmail is

OMR this is amazing! I LOVE IT!

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LOL! That was so HILARIOUS!

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I created a snake that takes up to 8 hours to kill, and they're in pain from the second they bite. The snake's called the Diamond Back Amethyst Eyed Crimson Rattle Snake or DBAECRS. Cool huh?

I thought you said in the summary that she would be four, not two. Or did you just change that when you did that it had been 3 years since Yami saw Yugi?

If I was in a situation like Yami, I'd want to know because it was MY child. I would have the right. It's not fair that something like that would've been kept from me. In fact, I'd have chewed out the people that kept that information from me. Probably would've killed 'em too.

hostage situation?

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*T I loved this