| Reviews for Polycephaly |
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A. Thorn chapter 5 . 7/20/2012 Nice to see you're still out there! |
citylights319 chapter 5 . 7/24/2011 ahh nooo. lol. .. but i'll wait, cuz i really love this story. |
citylights319 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011 Oh. My. GOD. |
Umm. Someone chapter 4 . 6/21/2011 Some spelling and grammar problems but good story. |
anonamiuse chapter 4 . 6/20/2011 lost... |
Dulcamara chapter 4 . 8/22/2010 i dont get this story very well... ;( |
Ariadne's Twine chapter 2 . 7/18/2010 *claps* Interesting twist. You never let me down, Kay. *slams head againster keyboard* You must tell me how Aser and Rowan are connected to Alex. Please? Anyway, executed perfectly. Bravo, Celestine. Bravo. Thanks, much. ~Rachel. |
Ariadne's Twine chapter 1 . 7/18/2010 *looks around* Alex Rider, dead. In the beginning of an Alex Rider fic... Testy, but well done. Congrats, my dear friend. I absolutely loved it. Probably one of the best Alex Rider fics I've read. I'm interested as to where you're going to take this. Thanks, much. ~Rachel. |
Amika-Kyou chapter 4 . 5/13/2010 That was good I really like your writing, it's quite sophisticated. After the long wait comprehending the situation is almost impossible, I have to admit. It's hard finding back into the story...I've forgotten pretty everything going on_' I hope the next chapter will be released sooner! :D |
tediously ordinary chapter 4 . 5/11/2010 Wow... I like the way you make everyone think. Like- it seems like Aser is Alex- you know with the blond hair and the brown eyes- but then again- Rowan was also wanted. Why was that? Anyway, this is a really awesome piece of writing. Please keep writing. P.S. I had an idea. Could Alex be born as Aser? Like I've heard some theories like if one person dies at the same time one person is born, sometimes they are like reincarnated or something. I really don't know. Just a guess. |
jamgurl112 chapter 1 . 5/11/2010 you are an amazing writer I loved the suspense. You hooked me on the first chapter, and being me that's hard to do. The only thing that irks me about your writing is you sometimes state the obvious after it has been implied and it seems redundant. Also the majority of you story is so well written that when there is sentence or even a phrase that sounds mediocre it screams "poorly written!". Despite the way that sounds it was a compliment. Anxious to keep reading and i love your cliffhanger (mostly because I don't have to wait to see what happens next);). |
v1nvampire aka anom chapter 4 . 5/11/2010 whoa~ new chappie~ i've been waiting for this. the length of the chapter just fine for me, as long as it's not too short. now, to the story... i've to re-read chapter three 'cuz i kinda forget some detail. the questions are... where's Ro? wasn't he in the same ambulance? and when the collision happened, did it happen in a stranded place? there's no one to watch/hear the accident ever happened or call for help. and now Massey is well-known family? i really want to know why is that. looking forward for your next chapter and more mystery to be unsolved~ XD |
Amika-Kyou chapter 3 . 9/13/2009 OMFG O.o That was fucking amazing! Especially the last line! I'm just curious what will happen to Rowan next...I beg you to continue onwards as fast as you can. Great story! Kyou~ |
Singer La chanteuse chapter 3 . 8/30/2009 Is the assassin Tom? It makes sense in a way. Tom is the assassin, driven to it after involvement in MI6 essentially kills his best friend. You keep mentioning that he's 'young', and at this point in the timeline he would be about nineteen. As for Aser and Rowan, either Aser is a clone of Alex somehow or Rowan is Alex, somehow. As you might be able to tell, I've been thinking about this. A lot. This story has just grabbed me and it won't let me go. I'm deeply interested to see if my theories are proven correct, or incorrect. Sincerely, Singer, La Chanteuse |
XxNEONQUEENxX chapter 3 . 8/29/2009 cmon cmon cmon! keep writing! and i love the mysterious guy! XP he's so cool, anyway continue with the next chappie! i love ur work it genius! -Uchiha |