Okay, let me start off my saying this first chapter has me captivated! You are an excellent writer! And... Prince Princeton! That was very clever of you. I have often wondered what Snow White's prince was named, but I can assure you Princeton never one crossed my mind! This is immediately going on my favorite list.

I must admit that I was initially concerned that you would be able to keep Snow White in character in this first person point of view, but you seemed to have done just fine with this first chapter. I cannot wait to read on!

xJadeRainx

:DD yay! Wedding scene! I love the description in this chapter (longest one so far!)! Her dress sounds so pretty!

lots of rhyming in this chapter, eh? muddy and bloody, glimmering and shimmering...:D Great chapter! Did L finally read it? Or were you just posting it because you finally realized she will take FOREVER to do it...?:D Kidding. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ha! I told you I would read it! Now please write more! You can't let him die! *sobs*

Anyway, I really liked it. I think that you wrote the characters all really well, and I love seeing things from Kane's perspective. Please don't let Princeton die! They need to be happy! :)

Ahh! Kane the creeper! His little fantasies are NOT okay! But they were well written. 8D Keep up all the great writing! I vote for a chap from Princeton's POV! Anyone? Anyone? Bueller...Bueller...

Gah! Cliffhangers! I have one word for you my friend, and that is awsome. :D Snow White the swashbuckling princess is pretty legit. Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait for your next update!

Oh wow. Kane is one scary dude. I loved the chap. from his POV! You do a good job of making him easy to hate. :)But what about a villian that we have to feel sympathy for too? It's kind of like what L.R. was talking about your house. Anyway, great update! Keep up the awesome writing! :)

Okay, first off, I never imagined a smirking Snow White, but it definately worked in this chapter! But I have to tell you that your Princeton seems like a more believeable character than your Snow does. He seems like more of a real person. That's not to say that Snow isn't great (I love her plan with the flowers!) but it just seems to me that when you write from her POV and when you write her from Princeton's POV she just seems like two different people. Hope that helped. Keep writing, I can see that this is going to be a great story!

Oops. Sorry. Kane. Didn't you have it spelled the other way when I read it your house? Because I thought it was like Cain and Abel, then?

Okay, first off, I love this story! :D And since that's not really anything helpful: I think I would like to know more about Cain. He's a very interesting character and it would be cool maybe see some chapters from his POV. :D That's all for now! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ok, here is the background on this peice. I am a major Snow White fan, but I keep reading stories and posts about her Prince being a whimp and pervert and that she was stupid to just jump on his horse and ride away with him. So I got kinda ticked off and thought "Fine, I will write the REAL ending, the one where the prince isn't a loser pervert and Snow White truly falls in love for logical reason other then becuase he was a hot singer dude." So I hope everyone likes it, and please review becuase I want to know what people think. Happy reading and stuff!