So great! Mai and Seto forever! The best one-shot I ever read. You could make a real miracle with this in a bigger story. I read all yours Seto Mai lemons and this Is my favorite.

I love the arrogantshipping. But ..Joey! I so sorry!QoQ
Llore por joy, senti horrible peor ..pueden ser un feliz trío

Caught! XD Ha!
Somehow I just can't be mad at Kaiba for this. XD

Great story! A wonderfully written one-shot.

The actual love scene was steamy, but not overally done either which was good to read. You did an amazing job capturing that sensuality and chemistry/attraction that is believable between Mai and Seto. With that sexual tension between the two and Joey's conflicts and pain with discovering his wife's infidelity and also addressing Joey and Kaiba's on rivalry... it makes for a great, quick read with well-developed conflicts. One of the best I read, thank you!

Great story! A wonderfully written one-shot.

The actual love scene was steamy, but not overally done either which was good to read. You did an amazing job capturing that sensuality and chemistry/attraction that is believable between Mai and Seto. With that sexual tension between the two and Joey's conflicts and pain with discovering his wife's infidelity and also addressing Joey and Kaiba's on rivalry... it makes for a great, quick read with well-developed conflicts. One of the best I read, thank you!

This was...really good! I really like the description at the beginning; it's nice to see a little bit of setting and structure before jumping right into the meat of things. Which, by the way, was really good. I love the last line, "Looks like I won again, mutt." That was perfect! Keep up the writing!