Bitch ass naruto

*reads chapter 10* Wait what about Boruto and Himawari?

Yo do fine with fluff. I should know, I prefer fluff over lemons.

Too bad it doesn't continue, it's a very good story, greetings, see you, bye!

I don't know what I should fear more. How bad this fanfic is or how people in the reviews think this is good. I swear I can make a fanfic where Naruto has all ultimate bloodlines, every character in the world is a female other than Naruto and add them to his harem, use a shit ton of unoriginal tropes and cliches and Bam! People here would come and say this fic is great!

Damn. On this site you can post the shittiest of plots and people would eat it up.

So Sasuke and Sakura get Naruto and his unborn child killed and nobody, and I mean fucking nobody had the thought of going after his attackers? The flying fuck? Why would nobody even think of making sure that justice is served and go after Sasuke and Sakura?

From this alone, I'm going to know this fic is garbage

It was a good story but you contradicted yourself constantly saying one thing and then the next chapter saying something else

Ok now I know you're just taking the piss. Since when does Naruto call the shots? He now has more command than the Hokage? Again, I'm steadily seeing how hypocritical Naruto is in this story. Earlier in story, he says that there aren't any times to play the hero. Anybody or anyone needs to get the job done, personal glory isn't important. Yet both in this chapter and in the one in Taki, he constantly tries to hold everyone back while he plays the hero. And seriously, modern warfare 2? How the fuck is Call of Duty in this universe? Fuck you.

I love how Naruto tell Kankuro that the solution to hate is to "forgive and forget", despite the fact that he most certainly didn't forgive and forget what Sasuke and Sakura did to him in the alternate future. Heck, Naruto planned on getting revenge and killing both of them. I'm all for the Uchiha cocksucker getting killed, but for Naruto to spout that "forgive and forget" bullshit makes him look like a hypocrite.

i dont like how you make hinata have to be naruto's first

I know this is too late but, The Niibi no Neko's (is it Niibi no neko? idk) name is Matatabi

lol shion taking the chunin test too?

Great story

What ever happened to karin uzumaki from the chūnin exams (where she was saved by Sasuke from the bear)?

Je pense qu'il faudrait tuer que Sasuke est blâmer Sakura pour cela.