| Reviews for Only Time Will Tell A Narnia Fanfic |
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E0R chapter 12 . 4/18/2015 Have only started reading this story today and I love it! You are a great writer kaitym! Please update soon! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2015 Ahh, you changed perspectives in the middle of the chapter! That is a mortal sin in the religion of writing, as it goes against the foundations of Grammar. I love your idea, it could be a good story, but I won't read it until you've corrected it. |
sarahwood chapter 12 . 4/12/2015 Can't wait for the next chapter! Will peter finally tell her the truth? Will she forgive him? Also you are actually a fair writer and your writing has improved throughout the story so you don't need to apologise that you're not very good each time :) |
Dancing Through The Afterlife chapter 11 . 7/15/2012 Please please please please write more? This is so so so good! I really want Kaity and Peter back together! Thank you! TheLonelyDancer xx |
pluviophile chapter 1 . 7/1/2012 So... I think this is an interesting idea, and I love it! :) You could work on the description a bit more. LIke, Kaity's guilt, for flirting with someone who wasn't Peter, that was swallowing her up. :) I dunno. Great idea, and I have a few ideas for a summary. If you're interested, PM me! :) Grace |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/1/2012 update asap |
Amos-Rie chapter 10 . 4/1/2012 i can't wait until the next chapter! I hope it'll be soon Aims5 |
snowcherry98 chapter 10 . 3/13/2012 It's really good so far update ASAP ;) |
MCH chapter 10 . 3/12/2012 About time too that peter gets himself sorted out and tell her what he saw as well. I smell trouble from the Telmarines. Like a good story please update. |
princess emma of narnia chapter 10 . 3/12/2012 updat asap |
princess emma of narnia chapter 9 . 1/2/2012 update asap |
Marcella chapter 8 . 12/29/2011 Please write more! I have fallen in love with this story and have to find out what happens next! I find it a little funny that she kept praying for Peter to show up and save her and when he did show up he didn't see how much she needed him. she should ask him why he is so mad at her! anyway i LOVE this story and really wish you would write more. |
WillowDryad chapter 8 . 12/28/2011 Aw, well, now you HAVE to do something about poor Peter's broken heart. More please! |
Christina Tomlinson chapter 8 . 12/28/2011 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! im soo happy you finally put up another chapter... i'd completely given up hope on this story that i was totally in love with... just reread the entire thing in a half hour... |
princess emma of narnia chapter 8 . 12/28/2011 update asap |