3 A very amazing story! I loved Val and Bee; you made such a unique couple and it was brilliant

A really loving story! I enjoyed reading every word of it, and Bee and Valante made me smile 3 You made such an unexplored pairing really come to life

This was beautiful. Thank you.

This is one of the most amazing piece of literature I've read in a long time. The characters were amazingly captivating, the story kept me on edge the entire time, and I couldn't help cry when all seemed lost. You, are one amazing author.

This was the first story I read of yours. I thought it was delightful. I loved the interaction between Bee and Valante. It is how love is supposed to be. It doesnt matter what the other looks like or their backgrund and history, you love them in spite of all that and this truly encompasses that notion.

My heart pounded, I cried, I laughed. All the responses a well thought out story deserved, I gave. Thank you.

Me x

Gosh, I'm crying at the same time I'm smiling. I love this story, I really do. I think it's my favourite of the stories I've read from you.

Thank you for the wonderful story. :) (Whee, my main is an undead priest!)

This was an amazing story! A story of a Forsaken Rogue and Human Priest in love...awesome! The endin confused me a little though, was that his ghost or something? But, nonetheless, this was an excellent story. )

Sorry to hear that people have been moaning, I really like this story. It still has your light conversations and the new characters are funny.

My one piece of criticism which I hope is constructive, is that the paragraphs are too big, and there are multiple people talking in a single paragraph. It just makes it a bit harder to read.

Please don't let the flamers disillusion you, I can't wait to read the next chapter :D.

*BAWLS*

That was the best story ever. I love you.

This. Story. Is. AWESOME.

More please!

Hmm. When I read your first story, I was glad to notice that you had no problem with grammar and the text was easy to read. In the first chapter on this, however, I was a bit disappointed as you proved me wrong of my earlier beliefs.

The actual story is perhaps a bit confusing, but maybe in time as we get to read more it'll be more clear.

Thanks for the story!