| Reviews for Ninja Slush |
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   macdjord chapter 6 . 12/3/2019 Huh. Interesting. This is the first time I've reread this older stuff in a few years, and now that I'm looking I can see faint but detectable precursors of your current works - Daniel Black and the Vancil Empire, for instance - in there. |
| TheChairIsAgainstTheWall chapter 4 . 12/12/2018 If you ever find your adventures in original novel-writing get you down, what with the getting paid to do what you love and all :P, I vote that you pick up this idea. Sasuke is really cool when he isn't being a flaming dick, which unfourtunately is most of the time. |
| ReadR13 chapter 6 . 12/14/2017 I like chapter 1 and 5 |
| Gekkou Yoko chapter 5 . 12/6/2016 Rawr, this story... it needs to be continued... think we could get another snippet of this, till Indomitable is finished? Then maybe fully flesh out this story line? This could be one of the Epics IMO... |
| keichan2 chapter 6 . 8/31/2016 This one is an amusing twist, I say! Nice one! |
| keichan2 chapter 3 . 8/31/2016 Now, this could be really fun! ;-p |
| keichan2 chapter 2 . 8/31/2016 I have to say that I would love to read more of this! |
| keichan2 chapter 1 . 8/31/2016 Oh? It is a nice idea… Should Naruto realize that he should try and use that transformation technique WITHOUT changing gender, he might become something really impressive! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2016 Henge jutsu is not an illusion, you retard. |
| obliviated fan chapter 5 . 7/16/2016 We're all perverts here. I'd love to read more of this one. |
| FicWader chapter 5 . 2/29/2016 Oh man, reading some of these, I'm torn between wanting more of this, and wanting next book to extermination to come out. Why can't you make shadow clones?! |
| OriksGaming chapter 6 . 2/16/2016 Interesting, but Sakura and Ino are too OP, and the brain damage thing is too OP. I'd much rather have it be that Naruto just never got a myriad of things explained to him and he can fix it in a month or two by scouring the archives with clones. It's just as cliché, but it's more realistic. |
| OriksGaming chapter 5 . 2/16/2016 interesting, but ultimately weird and unsatisfying to have Naruto practically becoming a girl. I'm constantly more focused on the logistics and the lack of effect of the taijutsu style on his male form, and his male forms muscles atrophying and other such things; I'm so focused on stuff like that, I'm not really enjoying the story. This kinda story has A LOT of holes. |
| OriksGaming chapter 4 . 2/16/2016 Yeah, sorry, I just don't really enjoy Sasuke centric fics at all. |
| OriksGaming chapter 3 . 2/16/2016 Yay, lemon story! WOOH! |
