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Daylyt007 chapter 20 . 7/12/2019 I read this entire fic in one sitting and i can honestly say that it has to be the most IC portrayals of V/B i've ever read. You tackled touchy subjects beautifully and your light hearted chapterst were so charming and believable it blew me away. I even created an account for the sole purpose of leaving a review and a fav, you deserve all the favs lmao. I would love to read more of this couple from you (maybe post buu/bra's birth?) but if not you've done more than enough with this. Thank you...just...thank you. |
Mars chapter 11 . 3/2/2015 So it's 3 years from the android saga, 1 year that they waited for goku ? |
Mars chapter 1 . 3/1/2015 That does make me wonder what they all did together those 9 days |
Guest chapter 4 . 8/19/2013 I remembered her saying in one of the dubs that she doesn't really know because she's too pre-occupied with Trunks to 'care' (forgot the exact word) about his whereabouts |
MalachiteFlames chapter 20 . 4/29/2013 Love this fic! it was rather well written, and nicely done! I adore the characterisations of everyone. :) MAL |
Adli chapter 13 . 9/6/2012 Nice chapter! I have to say, though, I have always wondered why B/V fanfic writers write Vegeta calling Bulma "woman" all the time. On the show he does it when they first meet and I could probably see him continuing to use it at first to annoy her. But by the time Trunks was born in the Android saga, Vegeta is already calling her by her first name. Not that they interact very often on screen, but when she's telling them about Dr. Gero, he calls her "Bulma" and also when she stops by Kami's place to drop off new armor for them during the Cell saga. And, of course, during the Buu saga he talks about her and thinks of her by her first name a few times. I do like how you wrote Vegeta in this chapter. Gruff, but concerned. Very cute! |
abbieouji chapter 20 . 6/19/2012 2 words. LOVED IT! its so cute! hey, can u PM me plz, i need 2 ask u somethng... () ().UU* VIRTUAL BUNNY! |
Haphazard Snow chapter 20 . 3/10/2012 Awesome fic! You write Bulma and Vegeta so well. I hope you write more soon! |
laixac chapter 1 . 8/31/2011 That was an awesome first chapter. I'm usually a ghost on here, but I felt it necessary for this story. I feel like your characterization of them was spot on. It's just the kind of fic I've been looking for. Looking forward to reading the next chapters :) |
Diclonious57 chapter 3 . 8/31/2011 the one-shots are good but the random japanese phrases is annoying. |
shasha chapter 20 . 4/16/2011 Nice story. Could've done without the annoying random Japanese phrases, but other than that, you have a good feel for the characters and their relationship. |
Kuroneko-sama07 chapter 20 . 1/11/2011 Love it! There are simply not enough good VxB fics set during this time period, so I was thrilled to find this one, and it is simply fabulous. Your portrayals of these characters are great, and I find them to be very in-character. And your writing style is just lovely - you use just enough detail and description to really pull me in and I feel like I'm almost feeling what the characters are feeling. Overall, wonderful job! This is definitely one for my favorites list! :D |
Vegetassj51 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010 me like :) |
Tyi-Maxwell chapter 4 . 8/21/2010 I love you because your chapter titles are all titles of the great queen 浜崎あゆみ! I am now going to read this story just because of that! all hail AYU! |
Rose Unspindle chapter 13 . 6/15/2010 D'aww. He put a bandaid on her boo boo. _ He actually refers to her as Bulma to Goku when he's asking him "You wouldn't happen to be talking about Bulma by any chance?" When Goku and the old supreme Kai are discussing the promised kiss. |