Reviews for Daydream
Sarah Archer chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
It was just a dream! XD Epic! I love this
J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Ah, delightful daydream fantasies... Though it feels like your ending promises him some fulfillment that usually isn't part of other daydream fan fix. Well written.
Scherherazade chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Great one shot, both amusing and hot.
Anana553 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
gr8 job xD
Ashes0909 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Very steamy little story. Thanks!
alldumbamericanrejects27 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
naughty colonel naughty
Nemesis Horizon chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Ok, first, good story! It was cute! :)

And second, could you explain to me what this whole, burned back business is? Why Riza had a transmutation circle on her back? I'm confused and a little embarassed to be asking you this but I hope you could answer me!

Thank you & good story!
White Phoenix chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Sweet story.

I liked the idea of them making love in the office.

But ... I would liked it to be real ... not just in Roy's dream.I was a little disappointed when I read the part with him waking up and Riza doing her job with the papers, knowing anything about his dream.

But the end was great .~
ohmybeatingspark chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
HAHA I LOVED it :] the favorite part was when Roy said, "Lieutenant, I want those pants off, and I want you on this desk so I can fuck you senseless." and she replied, "Yes sir." lmfao...I love how it was all a dream too :]
Hawkeye-mustang chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
What an awesome fic. I love the erotic detail in the dream. M...delicious. Sort of makes you want to have sex or dream of it. and, it's funny how he wakes up later and it's all a dream. Still, it's a good story and makes you hungary for action.
LiiZ-wa chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
xD mustang cracks me up...i can totally see this happening xD
1reallyblue1 chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Och, so much win! The little bits of snark Riza threw in, then the fact it was a dream, THEN the little grin for later...

Damn. One of the best one-shots I've read in a long, long time.
dragongoddess13 chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Aww, so sweet. I love the end. Very well written, excellent story line, and great dialogue!

keep up the good work
StarliteBaby chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
whoa!
shessymaru chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
i liked it you are a really good writer!
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