| Reviews for Daydream |
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Sarah Archer chapter 1 . 1/2/2014 It was just a dream! XD Epic! I love this |
J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 2/10/2013 Ah, delightful daydream fantasies... Though it feels like your ending promises him some fulfillment that usually isn't part of other daydream fan fix. Well written. |
Scherherazade chapter 1 . 9/10/2011 Great one shot, both amusing and hot. |
Anana553 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011 gr8 job xD |
Ashes0909 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010 Very steamy little story. Thanks! |
alldumbamericanrejects27 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010 naughty colonel naughty |
Nemesis Horizon chapter 1 . 7/20/2010 Ok, first, good story! It was cute! :) And second, could you explain to me what this whole, burned back business is? Why Riza had a transmutation circle on her back? I'm confused and a little embarassed to be asking you this but I hope you could answer me! Thank you & good story! |
White Phoenix chapter 1 . 6/12/2010 Sweet story. I liked the idea of them making love in the office. But ... I would liked it to be real ... not just in Roy's dream.I was a little disappointed when I read the part with him waking up and Riza doing her job with the papers, knowing anything about his dream. But the end was great .~ |
ohmybeatingspark chapter 1 . 5/21/2010 HAHA I LOVED it :] the favorite part was when Roy said, "Lieutenant, I want those pants off, and I want you on this desk so I can fuck you senseless." and she replied, "Yes sir." lmfao...I love how it was all a dream too :] |
Hawkeye-mustang chapter 1 . 12/16/2009 What an awesome fic. I love the erotic detail in the dream. M...delicious. Sort of makes you want to have sex or dream of it. and, it's funny how he wakes up later and it's all a dream. Still, it's a good story and makes you hungary for action. |
LiiZ-wa chapter 1 . 11/30/2009 xD mustang cracks me up...i can totally see this happening xD |
1reallyblue1 chapter 1 . 9/6/2009 Och, so much win! The little bits of snark Riza threw in, then the fact it was a dream, THEN the little grin for later... Damn. One of the best one-shots I've read in a long, long time. |
dragongoddess13 chapter 1 . 8/10/2009 Aww, so sweet. I love the end. Very well written, excellent story line, and great dialogue! keep up the good work |
StarliteBaby chapter 1 . 8/1/2009 whoa! |
shessymaru chapter 1 . 7/28/2009 i liked it you are a really good writer! |