Reviews for Just a Dream?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/13
Nice. Wish it’d be a full length story. Let’s not forget revenge on all the death eaters and death nibbles , specially Draco, pansy, crab n Goyle.
PurpleArrowhead chapter 1 . 10/29/2019
they will never name their children Albums, Severus or any combination thereof
c.karen09 chapter 1 . 10/13/2019
Exactly what should have happened! Thanks for writing!
Corwyn chapter 1 . 1/25/2019
Also worth a re-read! Thanks for sharing these with us.
EdTheBeast chapter 1 . 1/6/2019
Cute...!
DumbledoreGood chapter 1 . 11/28/2018
Apart from the dumbledore dislike, I’d say this would be a better storyline than what J.K. Rowling picked.
dude356 chapter 1 . 8/31/2018
Poor Luna. The reason her dad was acting the way he was in canon was that Luna had been kidnapped and taken to Malfoy Manor. Unless something happened off-page to return Luna to safety, she's either still alive in the Malfoy's dungeon or already dead. Harry and Hermione wouldn't know she's there because they never got kidnapped themselves, so they couldn't save her and her dad was never given the chance to tell him that Luna was taken anywhere in the first place. I can't imagine that the DE's would take Riddle's death well and would take out their anger on any prisoners they took.

Beyond Luna's presumed death because of all of the things in canon that didn't happen in this story, I really like this story. Ron knowing that he messed up and couldn't be mad at Harry and Hermione for falling in love is a more mature stance than Ron is usually given credit for in fanfics. I actually liked it. Ginny falling for Neville and accepting that she and Harry were over for good was also a nice touch. My favorite change to canon had to be the non-Harry killing way of getting rid of the horcrux in his head. I enjoy it when fics find creative ways of getting rid of the horcrux that don't involve killing Harry. The whole weakening of the horcrux due to Harry's love for Hermione idea was a nice one. I've read fics where a kiss, leading to a soulbond, caused the horcrux to be forced out of Harry's head and I've also read fics where sex accomplished the same thing, but I've never read one where just their love for each other weakened the horcrux to the point that it could be removed without killing Harry.
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 1 . 6/13/2018
Loved it!
Sighing guy chapter 1 . 6/10/2018
"Poor ron" well ron can GO DIE IN THE DEEPEST PIT EVER
TheBandit025 chapter 1 . 11/30/2017
Austrlia, Harry and Hermione better watch out if any of their sons get attack by Crocodiles
ElementalMaster16 chapter 1 . 7/11/2017
this is a really great one-shot! certainly one of the alternatives to canon i can fully get behind! (_)
Specky Clarke chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
A most excellent rewrite of canon showing the more logical sequence of events, especially HHr. I cannot envision RonHr or HGin at all.
44leroylamark chapter 1 . 9/11/2015
Проф! Ты - лучший! Ну, или один из лучших. Так или иначе.
csheila chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Terrific. Thanks for adding extra ending
Markus Ramikin chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
I approve, all the way to the lack of any Albuses and Severuses among their children.

(eeeexcept that silly and all-too-convenient bit about the Harry-horcrux being weakened from love.)

Thanks for writing all the H/HR stories. I needed a good dose of that to push that rubbish canon ending out of my mind. To quote another HP fanfic, it's not that I hate that Ron guy, I just can't see a reason for him to exist.
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