Omg I love that bit at the end!

So, I know this story's old, and my review might not even be seen by the author, but whatever. I'll start off with how I think that overall, this story is well-written and I enjoyed it very much. Though I did have one problem with it. When Harry first saw Charlie, his mood and emotion went from zero to sixty in a matter of seconds, and I feel you should have taken the time to build up to that point. Instead of Harry laughing and participating in the conversation completely, make him occasionally chuckle quietly, or have a small smile grace his face as Charlie tells about Romania. Make his change in emotion subtle, let noticeable. I truly did enjoy this story a lot.

cool

I like it.

I really love this. It's short but has a lot of substance to it. I love the way Charlie teases Harry and the way he calls him Firecracker and Harry's pouting is adorable. I don't know what this Unattainable Beauty is but I'm going to find out!

The story's reasonable, but your ideas are hidden by too many words that are run together. Proofread, and fix your space bar!

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! I love it!

I think u should turn it into a chapter story

Awesome! Love the ending, I now have something to say to my sisters boyfriend if needed :D

I love Sirius's last line. It was genius, absolutely perfect!

The ending was so funny ! Love it ! Thanks for the story.

I can just imagine Harry looking innocently over at Charlie at the end and saying, knock me up?

Ay what I want more I want to know what Sirius will do to Charlie

Aw, great story! lol love the ending. :) Yay! :)

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Trollololololololol! "You knock him up I knock you out." Genius.