I bshsjdbe ed my boy you little gremlin child please

This is not complete :")

This fanfiction is extremely enjoyable, i’ve LOVED reading it so far. You’re doing an assessment job with it! Please keep writing! 3

Sooooo sososo good. I love this, the writing is perfect and enjoyable, the pacing is v bueno. I love this, and it is immensely enjoyable to read.

Oh please say your going to write more on this! Im really liking it so far! PPleasekeep going!

Please update soon! Xxx

This is amazing!

And shit hits the fan?

This is beautiful

I find this story really interesting and although it is been a while since your last update I hope you update soon !
Good luck :)

plz update i love how long ur chapters are and ur writting style n i shouldent have my phone but im still reading this story so plz update soon! Also...i kinda wish Roy and Edward will get together

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and i cant wait for there mission i bet sum really tragic will happen also id be reall surprised if Ed dise show Roy his bruses

.Bruses

So yea...Please update :)

If I review this will you continue? Well, I can hope can't I? I love this little story, it's not all that wishy washy, quite unlike my own fan fictions and many other parental ones that I've read, a lot more like the actual series in my opinion. Plus the banter you are able to create is priceless!

Awesome story! Hope you update soon! And that last scene made me crack up haha :)

this story is really good! update soon please!

Please write more. I think its great story and finally everyone...i hope...is striaght! Please continue. If you need ideas send me a pm, and maybe i can help.