Is there gonna be squel to this one, because I loved it.

Finally! I've waited two days to give you this review dude! TWO WHOLE DAYS! Ah well, it was well worth the wait. Awesome!

I'll keep saying I never liked Thalassa in the Apollo Justice videogame, however your portrayal is quite nice to read. It's nice to hear that Alfor may still be alive after all these years and I felt you got the emotions down quite nicely. I eagerly await the next story.

Do you have MSN Messenger or anything like that?

Wow, suck a joy had to be destroyed by his dad's death. That's tragic.

I think it's apparent when there's a typo in the Chapter Title. You spelt "beautiful" with two l's. I would like for you to change that.

I would have liked to see scenes with pregnant Thalassa but I'll manage. I felt while the delivery scene was short it was nicely done. Most mothers assume they can stand the pain until they're in it, I always found that interesting.

I uploaded another small chaptered story awhile ago if you want to take a look at it.

Ooh la la la. Paris! I can imagine Apollo being a difficult baby somehow...

Oh you have to tell us about Thalassa being pregnant. It was a short chapter so I don't have much to comment on. It was nicely written but I wish it had been a bit longer. I'll let it slide considering Apollo wants to get to certain details of the story.

Oh by the way, California where this game takes place is the Largest State. Texas is the 2nd Largest and New York is the 3rd Largest. So the facts of that population sentence are incorrect. I think you may have gotten mixed up since the New York City Metro region is the largest Metropolitian region in the United States and Los Angeles Metro is the 2nd largest. Sorry for the long 2nd paragraph, I just love to study U.S. cities and their stats.

That was cute. Alfor's a sweet guy.

A great story, :D But about her age, I thought that she was 18 when she got Apollo, because she's 40 when AJ takes place, and since Apollo is 22 at that time it should be 40-2218 or I might be wrong...

Quite nice to see Alfor kinda acting stupidly but all for Thalassa's hand in marriage. Nice she accepted it.

That was awesome! Lolz at Alfor.

Wow, what a sweet man. Money doesn't buy love or life! So cute!

Progressing quite nicely through the events of the past. I would have wished more reaction from Apollo regarding what he's learning. I'm still enjoying it.

Next Chapter of Trials Of Law And Life was uploaded two days ago in case you didn't see it.

Wow, he sounds like a real sweet guy, putting himself out like that :D you rock!

And I thought I could never imagine this happening in-game, with Apollo's father being a good caring citizen. Nice job.