Swell story! Lots of credible action, too. I r ally liked how Hobbes managed the 'Silver Maddened Darien. Clever boy! And all tied up and neatly bowed. :)
Again, fourteen years late, but thank you.

Excellent job Alex!

Enjoyed the entire story, but would've thought that Darien's control while QSM would have been much less than shown here. Otherwise, I could easily picture all of the characters (somehow Robert Patrick came into my head as playing Logan) and their actions quite clearly.

Again, great job, and I look forward to reading more from you... especially in the VS.

"See" you soon!

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Krys

krysalys73

that was great thanks!

I signed on just so I can give you props for this wonderful fic! I reviewed it over at the other site, but I just had to say again, it kept me on the edge of my seat...very suspenseful, you nailed the characters, great villian..what more can I say. Hats off to ya, AXZ! A2/LB

This is an excellent story. Very well written. I have just discovered The Invisible Man and I am slowly but surely making my way through tha fan fic. Can't wait for the next chapter.

This is really a good story, I hope you will be posting the final chapters soon. I'm on pins and needles wondering how they will get out of this one.

This story is so exciting! I cannot wait for more chapters. I'm interested in everything that is happening. How are Darien, Alex and Hobbes going to get away hurt as badly as they are? Quick, chapter four! Dawn

I love this! Some good old fashioned character torture, my favorite. Take your time with parts 4 and 5, I'll try to wait patiently. Try...

Intresting story!

Keep on writing it.

(Its an order)

Wonderful as always. More please. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Aackkkk! This is REALLY good. Hurry up with the next part, please!

Me likes, give me more!