Reviews for Pain on Pain
macullen0 chapter 7 . 8/6
Plot is perfect. Thanks for this!
BurtonM1927 chapter 7 . 2/10
Finally, a writer brings out Bella's strength and self respect. Love the story.
that's just morbid chapter 7 . 11/7/2019
Damn it! I want slow gentle hot sex! This story is amazing. Perfectly covers all of the makeup stuff that the original story for some reason didn't. Love it!
trulisthetic chapter 7 . 11/1/2018
I just read this start to finish... and I have no idea if you will ever see this or if you're still around but I need you to know, this was my favorite fanfic of all times. I am in awe right now, I can't even think around the fact that this story as it is, was enough to justify all these years I've been in the world of fanfics. Seriously, I can't thank you enough. I can't believe how brilliant you are. The story was perfect, the emotions portrayed flawlessly with such realism GOODNESS I CANT BREATHE, the angst was so painful but not too much, and the comforting the end brought was worth a million heartaches. I was squealing the entire way through, my face is crimson red as I'm writing this, I legitimately cried, and there were about a dozen points when I just had to put the freaking phone down and scream in a pillow to release all the things you made me feel because honestly, this was SUCH A HIGH. I don't even know why people do drugs. I would have stopped to review at the end of every chapter because God knows you deserve it, you deserve the world for thisbut I freaking couldn't. if I waited a moment longer to click the button to the next chapter I would have literally combusted.
Seriously, this was just incredible. Perfection with every literal meaning of the word. I will never be able to show you how truly grateful I am to you for this gem. Best story I've ever read, kudos to you... THANK YOU. And I am in love with your brain.
Elvire23 chapter 7 . 9/3/2018
Thank you for sharing your story.
Elvire23 chapter 6 . 9/3/2018
I really dislike how Edward and his family handled it all.
Elvire23 chapter 5 . 9/3/2018
I think your going to easy on him. I want Bella to scream and shout and punish him for his idiocy.
Elvire23 chapter 4 . 9/3/2018
Good girl!
Elvire23 chapter 3 . 9/3/2018
He's an ass hole and needs someone to slap him hard. Edward is so stupid.
Elvire23 chapter 2 . 9/3/2018
Poor Bella.
Elvire23 chapter 1 . 9/3/2018
Oh shit! WTH
HiraFrance chapter 7 . 12/29/2017
Darn, it was intense huh?
Thanks Coquette for clearing things up :)
HiraFrance chapter 6 . 12/29/2017
Sweet sweet Bella...
HiraFrance chapter 5 . 12/29/2017
Too much love can kill, can't it?
It nearly happened to B and E...
HiraFrance chapter 4 . 12/29/2017
It was so heart lightning to have Alicat again ;)
Thanks hun!
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