You should have another chapter where Voldemort reads this after he comes back, and have him reply to it.

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Wow... that was so cute. Wow.

~ love

LOL! How I wish Voldy would see this xD

Sooooo cute

Firstly, I would like to congratulate you for the idea. It is a very original one. Also, your portrayal of Percy is very apt. So do keep up the good writing.

I loved it!

First off, it was hilarious. "...and left Auntie Muriel untouched." I couldn't help but laugh at that.

Second, your portrayl of a first year-an eleven-year-old-Percy is spot-on. Perfect. I couldn't have imagined it done better. He clearly abides by and respects the law but shows no signs yet on being estranged from his family-in fact, he threatens Voldemort not to hurt them.

In addition, as previously mentioned, you manage to weave in the humorous thought process of an eleven-year-old. (Another perfect moment-"P.S. Please, do not perceive my opinions for insolence. I don't mean to be rude.")

Percy, while clearly advanced as shown, for example, in his vocabulary and articulation, is still 11-and very believably so. Bravo/a.

-Still Town

Oh, cute little eleven-year-old rule-abiding Percy! What a lovely letter! I hope it reached Albania.

Heheheheheh. Direct quote:

You-Know-Who killed four of my uncles, six of my cousins, my best friend’s mum and dad, and left Auntie Muriel untouched. Does he know no justice?

I loved that!

Much love

Ailat

A great story. Very funny.

That is SO funny!

I loved the bit about Oliver Wood :D

An eleven year old, self righteous Percy...that's precious.

You have managed to convey the tones of an eleven year old boy quite well. The best part is the utter sincerety through which Percy tells Voldemort to die the most painful death possible and that he doesn't mean to be rude.

Wow. He was a prat even then!

Quite humorous.

Lol, that was great! I can imagine little Percy doing that. :D