Nice story

Omg that was cute haha

It was good.

Can't say that I am too familiar with this fandom (Wasn't really much of a Harry Potter fan, sue me.), but I liked how you deviated from the canon Harry x Ginny relationship. This was a cute little one-shot, and I enjoyed the ending! Although the scene was the classic stuck-in-a-closet-together, I found myself enjoying their predicament. This was well written. Good job!

SO ADORAble and wondERful yay!

Dont you dare change a thing about this fic. its perfect just the way it is. I loooovvveeeee baby H/HR and I would love it if you wrote more of it(one-shots or muti-chaps) cause this is some of the best baby H/HR Ive ever read :)

PS. This is going into my favs.

Great one shot

Until next time

Gloria

I like it! What song did you use? You might want to think about giving the artists credit in your disclaimer, though. They own this story as much as JK does. :)

Okay so just a few things to start off. I really don't normally like song fics, but this one was one of the best that I have read so far :)

Also near the end when they kiss wouldn't Hermione wrap her arms arond Harry's neck and Harry wrap his arms around her waist? It just seems more comfortable that way, otherwise there are too many arms in a small amount of space :D

Also I don't think I've ever read a Harry/Hermione fic just cause I don't particularily enjoy those two together, but you've portrayed them both very well :)

Good job and keep going!

Lee

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First off, this is really cute.

However, you probably don't need to hide behind somebody else's song. It doesn't seem appropriate to the plot or to the characters.

Secondly, I question the abruptness with which this happens - first week of their first year? Perhaps this is more reasonable if "what they really wanted" is interpreted to be love and acceptance instead of each other's bodies, but there isn't really any textual allusion to this meaning.

Keep writing and good luck!

hehehe funny story. :3