This is so lovely and poignant. You have a very good way of translating the emotional trails of each character without them coming off as repetitive or whiny. I loved Narcissa, Luna and Lucius' chapters especially. Luna's time at Malfoy Manor tends not to be examined too closely but the idea of her developing Stockholm Syndrome (of sorts) for Bellatrix is a fascinating idea. Neville's struggle to cope with fame was a nice touch, as well, particularly in contrast to Neville's character at the beginning of the series. If you have more chapters in mind, I'd love to see them.

~Amulet

This is definitely one of my favorite post-Battle fics. It catches the reader off guard and makes you consider angles you might not have thought of previously. Beautifully written.

I liked the beginning - it was unique, in some ways because the effects that you described it made me think. But then for me, the piece somewhere lost its charm after that. It got monotonous, to an extent, for me.

Hahahaha, I loved Myrtle's reason for moaning.. It was so her! I loved her characterization too - I thought you wrote her fabulously well :D How she thought haunting specific people is more fun, how she wanted Harry or Draco to be dead, how the ghosts played their part in the battle of hogwarts.. Your writing style was splendid here :D

I loved, loved this. I think I love this the most out of all the works I have read of yours. I love how you added this angle to Luna, this angle to Bella.. I love the possibility of Bella trying to create a heir for the Dark Lord and killing her baby in the process. I love how Bella is, in some ways, a stepmom for Luna. A lot of writers would have tried to portray a romantic relationship here, but this was so much more. Thank you so much for such an extraordinary read. Oh and I love the bit about Rodolphus too - the way you tried to show Bella and his relationship.

Absolutely loved it.

Well done

Mrs B

This was absolutely brilliant, he secretly likes/loves her and they do have a strange relationship but it works.

Well done

Mrs B

I think you wrote this brilliantly, he wants Voldemort to come back because then life had a meaning he had a purpose in life - to defeat the Dark Lord

Well done.

Mrs B

I loved how Lucius regrets imperiusing an innocent person who did nothing wrong and never asked for what happened to him.

Well done.

Mrs B

Andromeda is grieving for her daughter and although she hates her sister for the terrible things she did, a small part of her is grieving for Bellatrix to.

Brilliant, well done.

Mrs B

Awww poor Myrtle, the two boys she liked will not spend eternity with her.

Well done.

Mrs B

I absolutely loved this and how Bellatrix and Luna had a somewhat friendship, how they understood one another.

Well done.

Mrs B

I loved and felt sorry for him as he wishes he could be the old Neville again.

Well done.

Mrs B

I loved this. Narcissa weeping for the niece she never knew, finally she shows a softer side.

Well done

Mrs B

I loved this it was absolutely brilliant. Yes he was Voldemort but he didn't always used to be evil and she befriended him.

Well done.

Mrs B