Cool story! The opening disclaimer with Matt and Mello was so funny XD

I fell in love with this story. I'm sad to see it end and see L, Mello, Matt's deaths, my heart aches for them. I remember the part where Matt would invite Far to get closer to Near. Everything that Far and Near has now is because of those 3. In the memory of L. Lawliet, Mail Jeevas, and Mihael Keehl, you will always be remembered and loved by me. May you all rest in peace and at the same time live in the stories of the fans. Your memories will be kept alive. Lastly, dear author, thank you very much for this story.

This story was sooooooo good! It's the first Near / OC story I'm reading because honestly, I'm not that big of a Near fan. But this story was so well written. The first few chapters were absolutely adorable. With Far and Near being cute little kids in Wammy. And then when Far grows up to become a fiery teen, I was a little sad coz the adorable Far from Wammy's was my fav :P But I love how the story progressed. The writing style and flow of the story makes it incredibly easy to read. It wasn't overly dramatic or complex and I think you did a great job keeping Near in character :) Oh, and the little intro/outro parts where you do the disclaimer with Matt and Mello were so funny and entertaining. I loved them. Overall, amazing story 3

So, it just occurred to me that Near is fifteen. He went into a bar, with government officials, where someone tried to give him a lap dance, and saw a fifteen year old in what I'm assuming is a extextremely revealing maid's outfit, and nobody questioned it. Just how screwed up is New York?

This is one of my favorite stories. I love this story but for some reason a part of me feels like it would be better if they were siblings. For example after that bastard got Bear's mom pregnant he soon after had an affair with a another woman ( Far's mom )and got her pregnant or something like that. Also don't you think they are a little to young to be in a serious relationship.

I ran out of NearxOC fanfics a month ago and I've already read Artificial twice but it's so good. You should really write another NearxOC fanfiction.

THIS WAS FREAKING ADORABLE

Truly brilliant

Far is adorable i want to adopt her lol

Something about this chapter made me tear up for sweet little Far bless and near is warming love how you portray Matt

Is it just me or is my lovely Near being a lovely prick lol good story so far

Please stop making Far so helpless all the time; it's annoying.

"Fat spent a lonely night," BWAHAHAHA

GUD SHIT GUD SHIT RITE DER

L SHIPS IT HEEHEE