Great story can't wait to read more and to see what happens between Edward and Bella :)

ooohhh, i was really liking this! I so hope you'll come back and finish it!

Ah what a tangled web we have. Yes, she should have come clean, but she was just as caught up in the moment as he was. There are a lot of double standards that women have to fight against everyday and Edward shouldn't believe everything he reads. Tabloids lie - she works in fashion, so there are times when she probably has to go out for dinner or to a party with someone for work. She and Alice are a pair. I wonder if Alice is dressing her or what? LOL I like this. Its fun, a little bit of drama, but they are trying to get to know each other too. Awesome job!

LOL - what a crazy hot mess you have these people in! James and Seth cracked me up. Edward really likes Bella and I'm interested to find out what is going on in her head, especially after the Emmett reveal. Lots of great stuff! Awesome job.

LOL - I know the feeling about being alive. Real life can bury you easily! I really like the concept for this story. All the characters are fun and interesting. Edward is a hot musician. His and Bella's flirting was amazing. Then home and the awesome lovin. Amazing job.

luv the story

I can't believe Bella had the balls to act like the victim there at the first by almost walking out, when she was the one who knowingly slept with her ex-boyfriends brother, lol. And then had the gall to snap at Edward for questioning who she really is... when she hasn't done a very good job of showing him who she really is. If she likes sex... that's her prerogative... but she doesn't need to b*tch at people for questioning her about it. If that's a big part of who she is, she needs to own up to it. Getting all defensive about it just makes her look like she is ashamed of herself.

First she slept with Edward without telling him who she was, which made he look like she had ulterior motives... then she slept with Edward again... then she was offended that Edward was prepared for sex, like that says something bad about her, even though she did have sex with him. Girl was giving me whiplash. And then she goes on a tirade just because Edward is trying to figure her out, because she is quite frankly confusing.

I think she got off easy. If a guy slept with his ex-girlfriends sister, tried to blame it on the girl, b*tched at the girl when she questioned him, and then yelled at her about his promiscuous sex life as if she was wrong for bringing it up... he would get kicked to the curb. A girl would never put up with all that from a guy.

I'm sure Bella isn't a bad girl. She just shouldn't have started out their relationship with a lie... she put out a bad impression of herself, and she is going to have to deal with the aftermath. And I don't think she should have gotten upset with Edward for questioning her motives, with her past... I would too if I was him... and she probably would too if she was in his shoes too, if she was a celebrity thinking about dating a guy who is all over the tabloids and has slept with all of Hollywood. Edward isn't a bad guy for wanting to watch his back. Ya know?

Can't wait to see what these kiddoz get up to next ;)

Wow, your Bella is LUCKY that Edward wasn't more p*ssed.

If I had sex with someone, and then found out that they were my sister's ex, and obviously knew who I was... I would be mad. Beyond mad.

I love that your James isn't a bad guy... trying to steal Bella away from Edward. That is SO overused.

Alright

I'll bite... does she sleep around as much as they say?

Is she the arm candy of every good looking and "someone" in L.A. or is it just gossip?

It's no surprise that this story is good. Your an excellent writer and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm lovin Bella. Great Story

Love your story, a sexy and well center Bella is always nice. Can’t wait for the next update.

This story is both incredibly hot and incredibly mature. I'm excited to see your plans for these characters unfold. Thank you for sharing your work!

Is there a song for this one and I just dont see it? I dont have my new moon calendar yet either but my mother in law did get me the Robert Pattinson one! 7 miles of running- good lord I think I had a heart attack just from reading that. Seth, Hugh Hefner funny visual I like it!

WOW that was a hot lemon that I just read at work lol. My thoughts going on in my head while reading were exactly what Edward just said to her. She came back with a good answer, he had a right to wonder and she handled it great!

Karin