| Reviews for The Return |
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Kira Potter Jackson chapter 15 . 2/10 I see that the trio do most things together, until they have children the same day Melin as head of the Wizengamont seems great to me. Kira |
Kira Potter Jackson chapter 10 . 2/10 I'm glad Merlin is free. Ron's idea was very good. Kira |
Kira Potter Jackson chapter 5 . 2/10 Harry doing mischief. I'm glad Hermione accepted. Kira |
Guest chapter 15 . 10/17/2019 The story is good but damn there are a lot of mistakes in here or wrong writing. -Why don't they just call for dobby, first a letter to the school? -How do the dursleys now about the wedding, why let them stay there at all. It's just like the rest of the strangers, they should destroy rita. -Ehm.. to much famous now and nobody leave them alone, there gonna be dumb? gonna live near the weasleys or even in hogsmead, and teaching. They want peace and quite shouldn't they go to the muggle side of things. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2019 Nice nice |
sthrobbins chapter 3 . 10/4/2019 The foreplay is tedious. |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2019 Nice story |
Monster King chapter 15 . 10/6/2018 Great story I liked it a lot |
missgsmith51 chapter 13 . 4/17/2017 "When it reached me I was suddenly so happy, I remembered every happy moment of my life," Ron told them. ***** Sounds kind of like the extreme opposite of a Dementor. Well, I guess the Dursleys got what was coming to them. They were pretty nervy showing up at Harry's wedding with that request. Harry had their measure, though, when he pointed out that Petunia's tears were not grief for the rotten way she had treated her nephew; they were for herself and her humiliation at having been exposed. It was kind of nice to see Ron treat everyone decently for a change. |
missgsmith51 chapter 6 . 4/17/2017 Since when does Harry need to send a note to Dobby? Usually all he has to do is mention Dobby by name, and in he pops! Come to think of it, Hedwig usually just shows up when Harry needs her, too. According to many of the stories I've read, Harry has family property in Snowdonia. Perhaps they will get lucky. |
missgsmith51 chapter 4 . 4/16/2017 The idea of entering the Realm of Death reminds me of the scene in The Canterville Ghost where Virginia pleads with the Angel of Death to have mercy on Sir Simon, so that he can pass on from this world. I hope Harry will return rather than pass on ... but I guess we must wait. Apparently, I have read this story before, but I seem to have forgotten much of it. I really liked the trial. I'm glad Albus - who seems to have a way with words - was chosen to speak for Harry. I'm also glad he was on the correct side this time. (Actually, I was expecting a name-calling match between Snape and the Marauders. I guess they were on their best behavior ... for a change!) |
missgsmith51 chapter 15 . 5/8/2016 Very cute story! |
Fallow52 chapter 15 . 9/2/2015 Kudos :) |
Karatekid-Ninja chapter 15 . 7/5/2015 I really enjoyed this story, I thought it was an interesting plot and one i had not seen before |
Araytigre chapter 15 . 5/6/2015 This was a fun story, started out somewhat sad, but quickly gained momentum to a very happy end. Thank You. TTFN |