| Reviews for Naruto and the Guardians |
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   Earthly Entity chapter 2 . 2/3/2019 Interesting story, though tsunade offering them to become ninjas without knowing who they are or them simple accepting to it seems so out character on both sides. This part seems like it's forced. |
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| Shinobi Gatana chapter 30 . 12/17/2015 cruel, but not totally unexpected ending. |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 29 . 12/17/2015 Super happy with this chapter. Well done. |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 28 . 12/17/2015 Hay Lin is awesome! |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 27 . 12/17/2015 Okay... it's 3:30 am. I should be asleep, but 'I must keep reading...' |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 26 . 12/16/2015 A nice little plot twist. |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 24 . 12/16/2015 Awesome! |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 23 . 12/16/2015 Finally... confronting Tsunade! |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 22 . 12/16/2015 Nice! |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 17 . 12/15/2015 Holy crazy crap fest. Nerissa is part of the Akatsuki! |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 14 . 12/15/2015 You made the concern of Will and Hay Lin's friends, and boyfriends feel real. That's hard to do. Well done. |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 13 . 12/15/2015 This was a great chapter! |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 12 . 12/15/2015 Okay, I sort of understand where you are coming from now in your writing at the time. You are/were a young writer and it shined through in your topics and the way you wrote. It's not bad, just needs a touch of refinement. I am a bit older and my stuff still has a lot of issues I am trying to learn to fix, including remembering to fix grammar errors before posting. |
| Shinobi Gatana chapter 3 . 12/14/2015 ...The guys and the girls seemed to get super hurt feelings too easily to me. I am still reading the story as it has a lot of potential, but I guess I can only wait and see where the story goes from here. |
