I trie not to leave negative reviews but I’m honestly disappointed

Great story a shame you stopped it

damnit. this story sounds really itneresting and you stop the story.

A) Naruto being 28 during the Pain fight?

Did you maybe mean 18?

B) Women wanting into Naruto's pants.

You forgot about Shion from Demon Country, though granted she was a Priestess and not a kunoichi.

There are also the female Daimyos of Spring, Bird, Vegetable and I think it was Honey Country.
But true again not Kuniochi.

Same cannot be said of Shizuka of Nadeshiko and Sasame Fuuma, who are kunoichi.

And I almost forgot Yakumo Kurama, who is from Konoha. Although, one could argue she's a failed kunoichi.

And while most of them are from fillers, they all predate the Pain fight.

Although, you made mention of Hinata, but wouldn't that have pushed the timeline Post 4th War?

In which case there was also Princess Sara from the last Movie prior to the war, the one with the time travel plot. And it's VERY heavily hinted that Naruto knocked her up before returning to his own time.

Just saying, just because only one female from Konoha wanted in his pants, doesn't mean that the same was applicable world wide.

He was just too obtuse to realize their interest.

C) Kinda surprised that Doc. Strange didn't issue Naruto with an auxiliary membership of the Defenders, to be called up in time of need vs supernatural threats.

A just in case things go FUBAR scenario and the Doc. has experienced those before. Once bitten, twice shy and all that.

D) You referred to Kuruma as canine. That should be vulpine. While foxes, dogs and wolves are related, the relation of foxes with the other two is more distant, so using the term canine would be incorrect.

And the proper term for wolves would be lupine anyway.

Important to note if you're planning on bringing in the likes of Wolfsbane or other lycanthropes like the erstwhile Lobo brothers.

Why did you do this? T_T

Good luck in real life. Hope you continue this.

Nice job naruto

Good job on the start. Nice choice of woman naruto

Can't wait for chapter 4!

What? Fuck the people. Its their problem. Just whyyyy...

Why u do this to me.

Cool

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This is good!

Keep going

cool story loved it so far