| Reviews for Desert Jewel |
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steward7 chapter 17 . 3/21/2014 Funny end for sure and i love it |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/21/2013 yo I did it hurt |
wolfsblood13 chapter 17 . 5/17/2013 I love your story it had everything. Awesome job. |
Nena chapter 17 . 2/2/2013 AWWWWWW! |
totallyobsessed chapter 17 . 12/7/2012 ummm...poopy ending? i've neve cursed in my lifetime of 10years yet, and i don't intend on breaking that. but serioulsly, there could've been a better ending. really. i liked it though. great story, poopy ending. PICHA PICHA PICHA! PIKA PI! PICHU PI PICHU! RAI RAI RAICHU! |
Danny Phantom's Lover chapter 17 . 10/30/2012 Oh my God! Robin is pregnant again! |
Danny Phantom's Lover chapter 1 . 10/30/2012 Oh you mother f*****! |
me chapter 17 . 10/14/2012 ok i liked the story and plot but the fact you made robin a girl turned me off quite a bit. i'm just saying that if you describe something as yaoi i should not have to read one of my favorite couples go hetero on me. i love the idea but going full on chick and not just inner changes is a bit much for a yaoi |
tamer-of-beasts chapter 8 . 10/10/2012 needs work |
GraysonsGirl chapter 17 . 10/4/2012 Dear Fuck You I would have loved to send you a proper reply but sadly you are a guest and the only way I can even say my side of it is threw a review forum that will likely never be read by you. but if it is great. Yes the story did start out as a Yaoi and so i am sorry i changed it so that way the royal line would go on. sorry for putting that in. Also you mentioned my inability to spell. thank you once again I'm glad someone caught on to my Decoding disorder( a actual disorder that makes spelling and grammar almost impossible to learn and which i only received treatment for recently which is long after the story was completed). As for your Twilight Comment statistically something had to be worse though that got published and this is a free internet sight for fanfiction so please consider the source. also you chose to wast your own time and that's on you. didn't make you did it so please don't blame me for you poor time management. and please if you are that disappointing in this story feel free to write your own 'better' version. God bless 3 |
FUCK YOU chapter 17 . 10/3/2012 What the fuck was this bullshit? YOU MADE HIM A GIRL! WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU? We came here for YAOI not for some transgender WHORE. And WHY can't you spell anything right? Are you fucking stupid? What are you 12? I mean for Christ's sake you're American right? HOW THE FUCK CAN YOU NOT SPELL ENGLISH WORDS CORRECTLY. You are a fucking idiot and this story was so badly written that it was worse than Twilight! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS HOLY NEVER WRITE ANYTHING AGAIN! YOU ARE A HORRIBLE AUTHOR AND EVERYTHING YOU WRITE IS SHIT! Fuck you for wasting my time! |
Candy3314 chapter 5 . 5/20/2012 Who the heck just knocked Robin out 0_O and why isn't Robin fighting back? You'd think he'd be like; "HA! Bitch please! I've fought men and aliens 10 times the size of me, I can deal with this crap! Don't you dare freaking touch me or i'll claw your eyes out!" THAT would be entertaining :) And you kinda made Robin out to be a klutz? -_- Dude, Robin is ANYTHING but a klutz. I'm being a bit harsh here, but this is REALLY OOC and if you know it's gonna be this way, please put up a warning. |
Candy3314 chapter 4 . 5/20/2012 Oh lord when they find Robin his identity will be reveled AND- Well, it sure will be awkward with Robin sitting there with hardly any clothes on, looking super sexy, huh? XD |
Candy3314 chapter 3 . 5/20/2012 You have some spelling and grammar errors :/ But I love the story! Oh when Robin finds out it's Slade... he's going to be so freaking pissed. |
Candy3314 chapter 2 . 5/20/2012 Oh my god if the rest of the Teen Titans found him! XD All glossed up and such. |