Dang it! I really love theese types of stories but I can't read this one. Dude! You need to work on spelling and typing. I barely understood what you wrote half the time. I read the second chapter but, honestly, it's worse...

I really love this story.

finally the family meet the kids..it was nice and edward and bella r getting married..nice...let's see how they will get along with all of them under one roof..lol!

:)

jay

Alright well alittle intro here my name is alyss rose seriously not lying and this author is my bff basically my sis I hope that you love this story since she is a wonderful writer she will be having a new story coming out after the next two chapters for this story since it is basically done we are both in love with the bd wedding so she won't go in depth on the wedding. Her new story revolves around gymnastics,love, and friendship. If any of you feel the need of disagreeing with her story send me a comment because she has nothing wrong besides grammer and punctuation but this isn't our adv. lit/ lang arts class so whatever. Yes we are smart she is a henuis and I'm her loyal sidekick mess with her and you might die because I'm in your state lol. She will also possibly be publishing a story that I won't let you in on. Cause I can't or she might hurt me. If you have any questions concerns or suprises you want to give alli send me a message and I will gladly reply. She is my sis and I luv her we are bfs and stick up for eachother I know nome of you have sent anything bad but I'm just warning you she might also hurt peole for me I tried making her have an avalanche on the entire male population o the pe class after there wonderful behavior but they only got roasted like marshmellows are burning in endless pain with saton and will never be able to move again but whatever right it didn't work

sigh well I might take over her profile as she hasn't done anything with Alli I TOLD YOU TO DO SOMETHING heheh I'm evil in the mad scientist type way so if it's updated and has pictures and info thank me but any way I want to thank you all for being so nice to alli as she is going through a rough time well I like you all love ya alli

thanks

xoxoxoxoxoxoxo

Alyss Rose

aka

Blondie , sweetheart, honey, Tenly (don't ask), ALY RO, A1ly, Alyss Ro, but mostly RoRo

I know my friends LOVE nicknames creepy right!

awesome story so far

wow

Hi I loved the story please keep going

Awesome

YES YES YES CONTINUE PLEASE UDPAT ASAP I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED WITH CARLIE AND HER BROTHER WHAT DID THEY DO TO MAKE SO ANGRY! UPDATE ASAP I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT!

Hi loved this story are you going to be contineing it i hope so please its aweosme!

Oh my god Ali I LOVED it it's so good you were right about the grammer but it's still an amazing story. I think you should keep it going and tell how the wedding goes then tell what it's like to live with these four miny mes that would be great. I can not wait to see you. You are an amazing writer I forgive you for not calling me but sorry I didn't call you back last night I was shopping so this afternoon.

Xoxoxo luv ya

tris

oh I like...can't wait for them to meet the family!

Ok I've been waiting for this chapter a long time. It was kinda short and didn't really show any interaction with Edward and the kids or even Bella. I don't think it should have been that easy for him. He has it made to easy and not fair. Bella raised those kids on her own and it should have been more difficult for him. You have a good plot but I feel like you are rushing a little and you need to be a little more careful with the spelling. Don't let comments affect u in anyway.

:0)

Jay

:D keep it up :D

awesome!

please do more soon!

thanks

Em

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