I just realised the date of when this was posted it's a shame you didn't continue your story, I really wanted to know what happened next... It was a great start though, I really enjoyed reading it

that's sad. its been over a year since you last updated. *pouts* just when it was starting to get going too.

For being short, it has already caught my attention. Hope you will update soon.

its good so far

i like dis story

Hm...

sounds so interesting...

hope you update soon.

pls...