Y’know, for a moment I felt their hope and forgot the situation of the Earth Kingdom at that moment... damn, that last line hurt

Um, hi.

I started reading this story back in 2010 (which I only know because I went hunting through the reviews to find when I first left a review), and I just got myself caught up on this.

It is absolutely nuts (in a good way) that you are still chugging away at this story, and I'm kind of wondering if you, like me, suddenly found time and energy to dip back into fanfic writing due to the pandemic keeping everyone at home (or have you just been chipping slowly away at this over the last decade? If so, mega props to you dude).

I am so happy to see that the story has continued on; there are so few quality Longshot and Smellerbee fics out that, and I am excited to be following this (once again) to completion. I'm eager to see where you take our favorite Freedom Fighters from here, and curious to see how the perceived fall of the Earth Kingdom effects them (along with others in the Earth Kingdom).

Again, super excited that this is still going on. Keep it up!

I had forgotten about t he existence of the serpent in the Serpent’s pass, I actually got very surprised

Finally! A ray of hope!

This is so intense I’m loving it! I’m so scared and excited to see what’s happening next!

Absolutely wonderful chapter! I love how they’re healing together, and this was so melancholy in a beautiful way. I’m loving their development as characters and can’t wait for more!

Favorite chapter yet

I already lost count of how many times this fic has made me cry. The way you describe their feelings and everything else... I can picture it, feel it. Ugh, you left me wanting a hug. I’m really curious about what next turn Smellerbee and Longshot’s relationship (deeper friendship, i guess?) will take

Ugh, I can really feel the loss and emptiness. I wonder how Longshot is actually feeling...

I’ve been following this story for years and I just love it - thank you for still updating, even if the latest updates break my lil heart ;(

... why do you love making me cry?

Man really updated this again just to slay us one more time

Wow. Gonna hurt me like this 11 years later, huh? Okay okay cool cool cool cool cool

RIP jet and my feelings I guess

I had promised myself I wouldn’t cry. Look at me now TT

If i could favorite this 50 times, I would! The exploration of characters, emotions, motivations... it’s so good, even when narrating things that we saw happening in the show