Loved it

wonderful and the ending was beautiful. Congratulations.

What a lovely story of new hopes and dreams.

Great story thank you for writing it.

Amazing story. Starts dark and gloomy but well worth the read

Wow, just discovered this little gem. You do a wonderful job setting the dark, mysterious mood. Maybe a couple of tiny grammatical errors could use a beta's assistance, but it didn't really distract. Fascinating to watch the story coming together.

Beautiful ending! Glad he got to see Lucius again. :D Really enjoyed this story! Very well written with a great plot.

I think that this story had both dark and light to it, and because of that, it became something that is beautifully written. I'm sure that a lot of people have commented about how harry never turned dark after everything that he had faced... but i think that's where the beauty lies. After all those who were never truly light becomes dark and those who are truly light never becomes dark. I loved that even in the midst of darkness no character had truly lost the light... in which cases it happens in the real world.. when darkness reigns, people become hopeless and depressed, at times they become to lose their minds... But in this story, you have showed that even in the dark there are still little candles of light. I think this story would help people be remind of that. I thank you for sharing this beautifully story and I hope that you write many more, and in each story that comes to you, may bring a remembrance or leson to learn.

Loved it, but was sad Lucius and Harry was seperated along with their baby. But glad Lucius still watched over his love.

It was a perfect ending for the story...the tears started by the second sentence. I liked this story . I know that Harry is a man of deep emotions with a strong hero complex, but even Harry can give too much. Even though it wasn't described but the childhood he never had the trials and tribulation that he was pushed into to kill the first Dark Lord then to lose friends, his husband his child when tbe wizards once again turned on him should never er had happened but I think what was worse was they still expected him to save them once again. The amazing thing is even through all that he never went Dark.
Brilliant story.

How soon before they turn again?

Guess he isn't such a weakling after all eh?

They should do a blood adoption and give the baby to Luna. And eye for an eye.

He was a weakling in school...how does he figure that, abused starved possibly bound and u trained yet he still killed only using hexes and jinxes, doesn't sound weak to me.

Albus really is an arrogant Dick. He really should have guessed who it is by now lol.