Don Juan, not Don Won.

It's Daaé, not Daiee.

WOW! Morghan! I read the first bit on facebook and went on to this website to read the rest. It was amazing it was like reading a perfessional novel, I absolutely loved the story so far I can't wait to read the rest! Tell me when you post more up!

What a very interesting story so far - definitely original, which I always enjoy.

I personally don't mind short chapters! Sometimes in the beginning of a story it's easier with shorter chapters so as to get the story moving, tell a little background, and just get things established.

I think you're doing fine! I look forward to the next chapter.

I love phantom of the opera and I love these kind of stories. Great to find that Christine has a little brother so she will not be so alone in the mansion! Keep going girl! :-)

Why are these chapters so... short? I mean there good but they need to be a bit. somewhat longer because it seems your leaving off at the wrong place sometimes. But besides that its a good story, i'm happy and pleased, that this is another erik/christine shipper! You do well story telling.

The Musician

Hi! I like your story. Thank you!

I think you're on to a great story! But may I make a request to make the chapters a little longer? I know I sound like a hypocrite now, as I have the same problem, but I think if you draw out Erik's or Christine's thoughts/emotions you'll have a great story!