Love your story.

I was afraid he was going to turn into a dangerous man, but he was as sweetly needy as Bella. Lovely beginning to their relationship!

Loved this! Very sensual but I wanted more.

Great build up. Very well written. Even though it's been years since it was written - still a good fic, thanks.

amazing smutty goodness thanks for sharing ;D

Oh goodness, that was a great one-shot. I prefer to believe she has already aced high school and pretty much has her choice of universities. Choosing Dartmouth for the Fall semester, yet moving in early June when she graduates, to get over to him as soon as possible and start their lives together. Of course he comes to her for spring break and to her graduation. Them taking turns driving them both back to college.

Very good. I like the ending. I would have liked a bit more description of Edward's reactions in the lemon.

I can't for the life of me fathom how I have read hundreds of stories in the past 3 years and have not come across this one before now. I have read others of yours, I am going through your one-shots today to see what I have missed, but never have I read a story with such longing, such spark, and that has owned me so completely while I read it as this one. I love the way you write, especially erotica, and can't wait to read more. Thank you!

Fantastic story, fantastic characters, fantastic all the way around. Please. Please, continue!

excellent story.

Such a sweet story and very well written. Thanks for sharing. :)

Beautiful! I loved it :)

holy hell, that was super hot, they connected in a surreal level and

It's all sweet despite of the sex going on, I loved it.

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM sexy