this... this almost made me cry...

Oh jeez, so well written. You captured Malik's anguish perfectly. It is hard to believe that someone is gone, thank you for posting this.

AW! Poor Mal-nazir. Was he just, like having a mirage that Altair was holding him, or what?

I never really thought I'd like Alt/Mal, but this story was so sweet! When I listened to the song with this story in mind, I started crying...

I love reading tragedy stories, but it's so heartbreaking to know one of them died in some way. It makes it all that more powerful of a story. You really reflected that well here.

I'm really liking this story ;). But in case you didn't know, malik is actually older then altair.

AW! That was so sweet and depressing at the same time. I very much liked it though. It made my heart wrench at the end. Keep up the fantastic writing!

...damn... poor Malik ;;

Aggh, this was awful, but in a good way. I'd cry but I have to go to work soon. There's no way Altair would die on the job! *shakes head* I feel horrible for Malik. This was just done so well, I love it. Tragedy done right. Thank you for the read!