Beautiful i love this story

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Thank you so much for writing this!

Awwww awesome :)

Fantastic, every word. My chest actually hurt for Esme when she told how she felt when Carlisle left after their kiss. Wonderful, I'll have to check out your other stories as well.

wow. you rock, girlfriend!

God dammit! That story was probably the best one I've read in ages! I love how you managed to somewhat describe my favorite Twilight pairing's feelings for eachother. They're so in love, it's hard to describe. And you managed to do it so well, at one moment, as I went out to get a drink and came back, I actually thought I was reading a new Twilight eBook or something it was so good! Kudos Jennrich2830!

I am sure to read your other stories! And keep a watch on you!

-Desiree (iloveCody9)

oh wow! this story was so great. after finishing 'visions of love' earlier this morning, and then discovering that you had this other story posted up, i just had to read it straight away. i absolutely loved, the writing was so enchanting and you painted such a beautiful picture. i will definitely be reading the rest of your work. congratulations! another fab story that i absolutely fell in love with :D x

wow! this is really great so far! i can't wait to read the rest. i so hope they will stop doubting each other really soon and finally end up together like they should be! :D x

beautifully written!

i really like what you did with Carlisle, very funny to imagine him running away!

Great start! A good place to come in to the storey, as other people have done the earlier years. I like the way you portray Carlisle. There are a few typos, but not many.

Ooh! This was such a sweet chapter. I"m so sad it's over because it truly was a magnificent story. I got to know Carlisle and Esme so much better,and now I love them so much more. It was original, yet it stuck to Stephenie Meyer's character traits. I hope someday I can be just as good of a writer as you are. Can't wait to read more of your stories.

What a wonderfully sweet story - just as Carlisle and Esme deserved. These to outwardly calm people who communicate so much with their eyes and who are as passionate as their children.

Fortunately, the ink is not smeared when tears fall on the page of a computer screen, otherwise it would be impossible for you to read this. The word 'lovely' is not emphatic enough, but it's the best I can come up with since I am so preoccupied trying to control the sobs. Thank you for this story. It was wonderful.

Fabulous story, it was great to read :)