-“…and remember, breath in.”

Should be “breathe.”

-Anyway, there’s not too much to say – it’s been ages since I’ve seen Torchwood, but I do remember Jack taking Gwen to the firing range in one episode (this one I’m assuming), so I did get taken back to that in a nice way. But regardless, nice job. It’s a softer take on Jack, but not so soft that he feels too OOC.

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That was brilliant! Please update soon, I love it 3

Wow i really am enjoying this little series and I really hope you will continue it.

You had me laughing out loud at some points you have got the characters down great.

Off to look at your other torchwood fics now.

Awesome! I love it! Please update soon!

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You write Jack's POV amazingly - please continue this fic!

Jooper all the way :-D

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I liked this,it brings back happy memories of seasons 1 and 2.

fabulous little story. it was a great insight of what Jack could have been thinking that night and it seemed to hit home with what i presume to be the way his mind works.

it was angsty but honest and i loved the way you wrote and some of the comments you made like with Gwen being the only one of the Torchwood team to come from a sound background, i realised it but never really thought about it in the series, but in Jacks opinion where she would become scarred is so true, however brutal that sounds and it really opened my eyes.

keep up the awsome work with your writing, you really do have talent. :)

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that was great loved it was perfect so wish he had said something

maria