Ok that was great, dear author, I absolutely love your portrayal of their relationship in this short story. It was subtle and sweet yet not too cheesy. I think it perfectly complements the other one you did in James’ perspective. Great grammar and eloquence. It was a very charming piece and I absolutely loved it. It was simply brilliant!

That was a really well written oneshot and I think it was realistic in how the characters would have acted. For example James would have been too much of a gentleman to kiss her without asking first and no one can say things super well when they like someone and that showed in Lily. It was one of the best I've read and not overdone. It got a little confusing at one point as to what they were saying about their relationship but it was amazing!

So damn beautiful.

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oh, my god that was so good. please write more, my life depends on it. PLEASE omg this was so amazing

God damn. That was beautiful.

This must be one of the most beautiful one shots I've read! The rhythm, poetics words, they just seem so effortless. As someone who loves poetry and writing, I am in love with the wave you effortlessly wove this story together. Wow.

That was lovely. A breath of fresh air

THE MOST BEAUTIFUL ONESHOT IVE READ ABOUT JAMES AND LILY AMAZING JOB!

Aww, this is beautiful.
And yes, they will be worth it. :)

awww, I loved the way the story was developing.
super cute

Awesome

This is so beautiful.

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this is entirely too beautiful. it really show lily's vulnerability and how scared she is too feel what she is feeling. I thought it was powerful when she admits what she feels to james and says it will never be enough, because she realizes how she never will be as openly in love with him as he is with her. great piece!