| Reviews for 20 Pick Up Lines That Don't Work |
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   tchdhrui chapter 1 . 6/30 hilarious |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2019 Heehee. They're funny. |
| Shamelessnweird chapter 1 . 11/29/2018 I love it |
| TheSister95 chapter 1 . 6/8/2018 This was really sweet! |
| hauntedpumpkin56 chapter 1 . 1/16/2018 This was adorable! Loved it! |
| Em Mayne chapter 1 . 1/7/2017 I laughed my head of! This is so cute! |
| tigergirl-moonstar chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 Very funny |
| steelgray chapter 1 . 1/7/2015 Loved it; it's really cute! |
| Codename Jellybean chapter 1 . 7/28/2014 Cute :3 I suppose. Ish. Liked '50 Things' better. But certainly above average. :D |
| aMouthySlytherin chapter 1 . 6/20/2014 Oh my god! This was one of the funniest HP tics i've ever read and i've read a lot! My favorite lines were "Oh are you gonna go and jump off the Astronomy tower,then?"/"Moony your body is like a temple" "Sorry, no services today"/"I,m feeling a little off today, would you like to turn me on?"/"Can I test your zipper for you?" "You don't have to. I already asked James to" "WHAT?"/"Wanna make some magic?"/"If the home is where the heart is, then my home is in you" "Sorry babe, you've just been evicted" XD the "lets make some magic" line had me laughing like a loon! |
| V. L. Crawford chapter 1 . 10/11/2013 Poor Sirius was treated mean by Remus. I think we should go werewolf hunting. |
| Anne Lov chapter 1 . 8/19/2013 "Wanna make some magic?" kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk i can't breath kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk "I'll let you in on a little secret; I know something with the exact same measurements... if you catch my drift." kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk OMG "...Is that a no?" I never laughed so hard reading a fanfic. Fact. And I loved it kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk |
| FandomNut chapter 1 . 7/25/2013 I laughed so hard I cried! That was insanely funny. My favorites were: "I'll make you the happiest werewolf alive, I promise." "...Oh, are you gonna go and jump off of the Astronomy tower, then?" "Cruel, Moony, cruel." "Hey, Rem." "No." "Hmphf. I was gonna say, that you're wearing nice jeans today." "...Thank you..." "Can I test the zipper for you?" "You don't have to. I already asked James to." "WHAT?" "Remus, have sex with me." "Was that an order, Sirius Black?" "If I say it was, will you have sex with me?" "No... but I will punch you." I really loved all of then and picking favorites were super hard. The last one was hilarious too, but I don't know if that counts as a pick-up line or begging. XD I have to ask, where did you get those lines? |
| slimandalittlebitfoxy chapter 1 . 6/22/2013 "'I've only got three days to li-' 'No, Padfoot.; 'But, but, three days!' 'I'll make it two days if you don't shut it.' Smiles innocently." OH MY GOD THE SASS. I have tears in my eyes that was perfect. XD |
| sonnenblumeues chapter 1 . 3/17/2013 So funny. "Hey, can I sleep with you tonight? I lost my teddy bear... And I'm sad... See?" Points at face. "Go buy a new one. Or use James." "I've only got three days to li-" "No, Padfoot." "But, but, three days!" "I'll make it two days if you don't shut it." Smiles innocently. "Hey, Rem." "No." "Hmphf. I was gonna say, that you're wearing nice jeans today." "...Thank you..." "Can I test the zipper for you?" "You don't have to. I already asked James to." "WHAT?" Hilarious xD |
