Loved not only your portrayal of the twins, but your portrayal of the house of Ravenclaw.

I am a twin to ut we r a girl plus boy and even though we do not look like people still expect us to be really similar but we r not this I not the same but ah well I loved reading this brilliant fanfic

Very insightful. Keep writing

i like e idea tt courage is not evryting n certainly shldn't b tot of as an impt attribute...

Breathtakingly beautiful!

Speaking as a twin myself, I hate when people assume that my sister and I should be alike. Recently i was asked if i was wearing contacts-because twins should /obviously/ look alike and have the same eye color! This story made me feel much better. I'm glad there is somebody who completely understands how twins can really similar and yet different at the same time. Very lyrical, very poetic- I love it!

This is beautiful and I love how you delved into Padma's character. You portrayed her perfectly. :)

I've always thought Padma and Parvati are interesting minor characters - they're identical twins but in different houses, and they don't seem to have the same kind of relationship as Fred and George. This is a good character study of both of them. I was really surprised at the end - I guess because you concentrate on Padma in the beginning I didn't think she'd die! Very sad ending.

I love your language in these sentences especially: "Simply because she does not fall so hard in love with the sweet adrenaline that comes from rushing headlong into battle does not mean she is any less a hero" and "But Voldemort cares nothing for “should have beens” and “would bes” and Padma dies for her belief—dies—not a coward—but calm, collected not-courage—Padma is not a Gryffindor, she is a Ravenclaw, and she is not courageous—she is sensible, and she falls in the beauty of her common sense."

Very good! Brilliant job in showing the difference between the Patil twins, and that being brave doesn't necessarily mean having to dive head-long into battle. I also liked how you use colors to describe the twins different personalities.

Keep up the good work.

This is really good. You know how to get deep into the characters' heads. It's interesting that the two twins ended up in different houses and you did a great job of explaining the differences between them. This could also be seen as the difference between a Ravenclaw and Gryffindor hero in general.

Wow. I had never thought of something like ths. It's really good. :D

Wow...just wow I got shivers. That was so incredibly powerful,really those last few paragraphs, where there was one where there should be two. You really have a way with words

Really good. You don't see many Padma stories!

You are a master at descriptive prose! I love your writing. Brilliant.

Love your

HLM