Reviews for The Night It Rained
Jewel Paris chapter 8 . 9/15/2014
I started crying for no reason, and I finally know why. Cause the story ended! And with such a beautiful ending too *sniffles*
Tonystarksgirl chapter 4 . 11/12/2013
Cute I love it!
Brie45 chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Luvs
Takara Matsudaira chapter 8 . 9/29/2009
I was completely taken a back in shock at the sudden change between Karai and Michelangelo. True, I am a Leonardo and Karai fan, because they have an honor-sense between the two that will never depart. Though, I would have to admit that I did enjoy reading your fanfic. It gave me a new perspective. Michelangelo's personality could, effect Karai's by a long shot, from cold, distance and obediant, to heart warming and caring. Still, it's a change I will not adopt so quickly. Just, because I am stubborn. xP

~Mango
Gohanzgirl chapter 8 . 9/11/2009
I really really enjoyed reading this! You really did a great job here!
Navaka114 chapter 3 . 8/30/2009
Well since this isn't a romance fic I can't expect them to get together. I wonder when she'll tell him or if she ever will...
zenonaa chapter 8 . 8/24/2009
Okay. You've converted me. Mikey and Karai... 3 3 3! I loved that story so much. I'm favouriting it big time...
Mikell chapter 8 . 8/19/2009
What an interesting story. I love how Mike won her over. lol He's such a trip.

I've heard (but haven't read myself) that the Karai of the comics was more honorable and was even semi-friendly to the turtles. In that 'verse, I can see this happening.

Well done.

Rejoicing in the day,

-Mary
WebMistressGina chapter 8 . 8/19/2009
I'm sad to see it end, but I certainly enjoyed it and again, I'm glad you didn't portray Karai as unfeeling b*tch. And I liked the spin you had on this; most would assume that she'd be friends with Leo only, but there have been episodes where she seemed to have liked them all (maybe except Raph, but I think she could understand her anger.

Anyway, a very enjoyable read indeed :D
Nala162024 chapter 8 . 8/19/2009
I love this story, I'm sad it's the end:( You wrapped it up great though, I love the part:

Hey isn’t that Karai”

All three heads turned to where the red clad turtle was looking, and there a building across from them was Karai. Green eyes sparkled with amusement and lips smiled. Michelangelo who had slipped out of his brother’s hold, smiled and waved. The women gave a small wave in returned before fading completely into the shadows.

The night it rains, the two will met again.

That's a brillent way to wrap it up. Please, let me know if you have anymore stories with Karai in them, I'll at least check them out.
Taura Callisto chapter 7 . 8/13/2009
This chapter was a diffinite improvement, grammar/typingwise, but the story itself only seems to get better. I'm looking forward to the next installment
Emily chapter 7 . 8/12/2009
Damn I hope Karai's okay, for Mikey's sake. Also I'm glad Mikey either beat Bishop up to a bloody pulp or killed him. That man has no soul worthy of any mercy. Please Update Soon.
zenonaa chapter 7 . 8/10/2009
Your grammar is getting better. I don't mind as long as it doesn't get in the way of the story too much, which it doesn't.

It's a nice story so far, but I'm not buying the whole KaraixMikey thing. Personally, I think they just don't go together. It's sort of like putting Bishop and Angel together, or April and the Shredder. Of course, this is my opinion. I wouldn't want you to change the story in any way, because it is a good story. I might even change my mind by the end of this for all I know.

I want you to keep up the good work and prove this narrow minded old fool wrong. x]

Anyway, comments for the last chapter. Poor Karai! D: I hope she's not dead, because that would break Mikey's heart. I hope his brothers come soon.
Nala162024 chapter 7 . 8/5/2009
Aw, not the end:( Thank you for dedicating this chapter to me:) I love the part:

“Sixty bottles of beer on the wall, sixty bottles of beer. Take one down pass it around, sixty bottles of beer on the wall. Seventy-nine bottles of beer on the wall, seventy-nine bottles of beers, take one down pass it around, seventy-nine bottles of beer on the wall. Seventy—”

“Keep singing and I will kill you”

I can so see Karai saying that, heck I would probably would say that .

I think Bishop is when he is a bad guy, is perverted. He seems that way to me in my favorite episode " Hun On The Run". Does anybody really know how old Karai is in the cartoon, movie, or both?
Agent66 chapter 7 . 8/5/2009
Did I not review the last chapter? I may forgotten.

Brilliant. I have no more to say, cause...well, it's brilliant.

More chapters! I put up like four in two days! Cause I was in the zone and...anyway, you write! You update now! Or a week...I could wait that long I guess...
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